Food travels thousands of miles from producers to consumers, some people think that it would be better for environment and economy if people ate only yhe local food produced by the farmers. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Consuming food is considered as a vital part to sustain human life. Some section of the society argues that, if

public consume food

Suggestion

the public consumes food

public consumes food

that are produced by natives can benefit both economic sector and nature as well.

This

essay completely agrees with the notion and substantiate with examples.

Firstly

, if consumers spend money on local foods, it can ameliorate the domestic economic sector due to the money flow into

this

area.

For instance

, a recent survey conducted by ARGI reveals that, some people started buying

local

Suggestion

locally

made products that are produced by native farmers, has played a major role in significantly surging these farmer's wealth.

Secondly

, if,

public

Suggestion

publicly

gave

preferance

a strong liking

preference

preferences

local

Suggestion

locally

made products and buy them, more people will commence doing agriculture and

this

can cause a great amount of

greenary

green foliage

greenery

, because of

this

increase in vegetation it can absorb a plethora of

green house

a building with glass walls and roof; for the cultivation and exhibition of plants under controlled conditions

greenhouse

gases from the atmosphere

Accept space

in particular

Carbon

die

Suggestion

dies

oxide

Accept space

This

action will decrease atmospheric pollution significantly and eventually aids in curbing global warming.

However

, there are few people who say that, depending overly on domestic products can affect the quality of products they make, so to avoid

this

situation public should rely on

foregin

of concern to or concerning the affairs of other nations (other than your own)

foreign

goods to a certain extent.

For example

, the quality of rice locally produced in India, has deteriorated abundantly due to high demands

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So to tackle

this

situation,

government

Suggestion

the government

decided to import high quality rice from abroad.

Overall

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Overall, this

this

essay agrees with

statement

Suggestion

the statement

a statement

statements

that,

natvies

a person born in a particular place or country

natives

should support

local

Suggestion

locally

made food for the betterment of economy and environment.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

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To conclude
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Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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7Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
17Grammar mistakes
 

4 paragraphs

259 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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Topic Vocabulary:

carbon footprint
sustainable agriculture
food miles
local economy
self-sustaining communities
preservatives
ecosystems
global trade
nutritional variety
farm-to-table
agricultural traditions
seasonality
feasibility
carbon emissions
environmental degradation

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Food travels thousands of miles from producers to consumers, some people think that it would be better for environment and economy if people ate only yhe local food produced by the farmers. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Include an introduction and conclusion

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Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in other countries. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Some people think that a good diet and exercise are not necessary for a healthy and long life. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Modern forms of communication such as email and messaging have reduced the amount of time people spend seeing their friends. This has had a negative effect on their social lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is difficult for many people to create a balance between their professional and their personal life. What are the causes of this? What can be done to solve this problem?