Food travels thousands of miles from producers to consumers, some people think that it would be better for environment and economy if people ate only yhe local food produced by the farmers. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Consuming food is considered as a vital part to sustain human life. Some section of the society argues that, if

public consume food

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the public consumes food

public consumes food

that are produced by natives can benefit both economic sector and nature as well.

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essay completely agrees with the notion and substantiate with examples.

Firstly

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, if consumers spend money on local foods, it can ameliorate the domestic economic sector due to the money flow into

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area.

For instance

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, a recent survey conducted by ARGI reveals that, some people started buying

local

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locally

made products that are produced by native farmers, has played a major role in significantly surging these farmer's wealth.

Secondly

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, if,

public

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publicly

gave

preferance

a strong liking

preference

preferences

local

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locally

made products and buy them, more people will commence doing agriculture and

this

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can cause a great amount of

greenary

green foliage

greenery

, because of

this

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increase in vegetation it can absorb a plethora of

green house

a building with glass walls and roof; for the cultivation and exhibition of plants under controlled conditions

greenhouse

gases from the atmosphere

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in particular

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Carbon

die

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dies

oxide

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action will decrease atmospheric pollution significantly and eventually aids in curbing global warming.

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, there are few people who say that, depending overly on domestic products can affect the quality of products they make, so to avoid

this

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situation public should rely on

foregin

of concern to or concerning the affairs of other nations (other than your own)

foreign

goods to a certain extent.

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, the quality of rice locally produced in India, has deteriorated abundantly due to high demands

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So to tackle

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situation,

government

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the government

decided to import high quality rice from abroad.

Overall

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Overall, this

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essay agrees with

statement

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the statement

a statement

statements

that,

natvies

a person born in a particular place or country

natives

should support

local

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locally

made food for the betterment of economy and environment.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

259 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

carbon footprint
sustainable agriculture
food miles
local economy
self-sustaining communities
preservatives
ecosystems
global trade
nutritional variety
farm-to-table
agricultural traditions
seasonality
feasibility
carbon emissions
environmental degradation

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Food travels thousands of miles from producers to consumers, some people think that it would be better for environment and economy if people ate only yhe local food produced by the farmers. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Include an introduction and conclusion

🔶Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

As the number of private cars has increased, so too has the level of pollution in many cities. What can be done to tackle this increasingly common problem?

The image explains how Pu-erh ripe tea and raw tea are made

With deforestation, urban development and illegal hunting, many animal species are becoming endangered as they lose their habitat and some are even treatened to the point of extinction. Do you think it is important to protect animals? What measures can be taken to deal with this problem?