You work at home and you have a problem with a piece of equipment your purchased for your job. Write a letter to company which supplied the equipment.

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Dear

sir

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madam

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Madam

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, I am a laundress and I do all my work at home. I purchased an 8kg

semi automatic

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semi-automatic

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washing

machine

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from your outlet on Wednesday 5th of January 2020. It worked perfectly at first on the first day but I discovered that there

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a leakage at the bottom of the

machine

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It’s

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draining function is faulty as well. I have resorted to scooping the water after each use and

this

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has been very stressful for me. I work 12 hours

everyday

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and my purpose

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purchasing the

machine

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is to reduce the stress I go through as a laundress, but

this

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has actually created more problems for me because I have to clean up each

time

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I use the

machine

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due to

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the leakage.

Apart from

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this

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, the faulty draining function means that I have to spend more

time

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apply

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draining the cloth as I have to manually scoop out the water after each use. The purpose of buying

this

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machine

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which is to reduce the

time

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I spend washing, is yet to be met. I

also

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discovered that there are scratches on the body of the

machine

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and it makes me wonder if it has been used before.

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these reasons, I will be returning the

machine

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tomorrow. I have attached a photocopy of my receipt and guarantee form to

this

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letter. I will be glad if I can get a new washing

machine

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totally different from

this

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one except you can reassure me that there will be no problems like

this

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in the future after the repair of

this

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particular one. Thank you for

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time

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. Yours sincerely, Goodness Paulson.

Mon Dec 23 2019

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Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
2
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
9
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

1 paragraphs

277 words

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You work at home and you have a problem with a piece of equipment your purchased for your job. Write a letter to company which supplied the equipment.

Structure your letter

It has been claimed that workers over 50 are not resposilbe to rapidly changing ideas in the modern workplace and that for this reason younger workers are to be preferred. To what extend to you agree or disagree?

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