You work at home and have a problem with a piece of equipment you bought for your job. Write a letter to the shop or company that supplied the equipment. In your letter Describe the problem with this equipment. Explain how this problem is affecting your job. Say what you want this company to do for you.

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Dear sir or madam, I am a laundress and I do all my work at home. I purchased an 8kg semi-automatic washing

Machine

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from your outlet on Wednesday 5th of January 2020. It worked perfectly on the

first

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day, but I discovered that there is a leakage at the bottom of the

Machine

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, and

It’s

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Its

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draining function is faulty as well. I have resorted to scooping the water after each use and it has been very stressful for me. I work 12 hours

everyday

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and my purpose

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purchasing the

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is to reduce the stress I go through as a laundress, but these faults

has

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actually created more problems for me because I have to clean up

everytime

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I use the

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due to the leakage. Apart from

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, the faulty draining function means that I have to spend more time

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apply

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draining the cloth as I have to manually scoop out the water after each use. The purpose of buying

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machine

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which is to reduce the time I spend washing

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is yet to be met. I

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discovered that there are scratches on the body of the

machine

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and it makes me wonder if it has been used before. Due to these reasons, I will be returning the

machine

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tomorrow. I have attached a copy of my receipt and guarantee form to

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letter. I will be glad if I can get a new washing

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totally different from

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one except you can reassure me that there will be no problems like

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in the future, after the repair of

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particular one. Thank you for

time

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your time

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. Yours sincerely, Goodness Paulson.

Submitted by goodnessdey4ever on Mon Dec 23 2019

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Contractions

Formal and informal language refers to using different forms of language in different settings.

In informal writing, you can use contractions such as I’ll and Сan’t.

In formal writing, you should write I will and Can not.

Do not use exclamation mark in formal writing, but you can use it in informal writing.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

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8 paragraphs

275 words

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Some people think that people should be given the right to use fresh water as they like. Others believe governments should strictly control the use of fresh water. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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