You work at home and have a problem with a piece of equipment you bought for your job. Write a letter to the shop or company that supplied the equipment. In your letter Describe the problem with this equipment. Explain how this problem is affecting your job. Say what you want this company to do for you.
Dear sir or madam,
I am a laundress and I do all my work at home. I purchased an 8kg semi-automatic washing
Machine
from your outlet on Wednesday 5th of January 2020. It worked perfectly on the first
day, but I discovered that there is a leakage at the bottom of the Machine
, and It’s
draining function is faulty as well. I have resorted to scooping the water after each use and it has been very stressful for me.
I work 12 hours Correct your spelling
Its
everyday
and my purpose Replace the word
every day
of
purchasing the Change preposition
in
Machine
is to reduce the stress I go through as a laundress, but these faults has
actually created more problems for me because I have to clean up Change the verb form
have
everytime
I use the Replace the word
every time
Machine
due to the leakage. Apart from this
, the faulty draining function means that I have to spend more time in
draining the cloth as I have to manually scoop out the water after each use. The purpose of buying Change preposition
apply
this
machine
which is to reduce the time I spend washing,
is yet to be met. I Remove the comma
apply
also
discovered that there are scratches on the body of the machine
and it makes me wonder if it has been used before.
Due to these reasons, I will be returning the machine
tomorrow. I have attached a copy of my receipt and guarantee form to this
letter.
I will be glad if I can get a new washing Machine
totally different from this
one except you can reassure me that there will be no problems like this
in the future, after the repair of this
particular one.
Thank you for time
.
Yours sincerely,
Goodness Paulson.Correct pronoun usage
your time
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