The graphs indicate the source of complaints about the Bank of America and the amount of time it takes to have the complaints resolved. Summarise the information by selecting and report in the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graphs indicate the source of complaints about the Bank of America and the amount of time it takes to have the complaints resolved.

Summarise the information by selecting and report in the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie chart compares the percentages of
complaints
made by seven different categories (Public, Insurance companies, Media, Government agencies, Out of State,
Bank
employees, and others) about the
Bank
of America,
while
the bar graph depicts the average time required to resolve those objections in a year.
It is clear that
among seven entities, the highest percentage of
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dissatisfaction came from the mass people. We
also
can see that the resolution time for those
complaints
varies from 4 to 6 months.
According to
the pie chart, the highest portion of
complaints
about the
Bank
, more than 60%, was reported by the public
while
the
second
largest figure came from
the
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government agencies, just over 11%. Insurance companies recorded 8% objections and the lowest ratio of those
complaints
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originated from
the
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bank
employees and
out of state
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entities, 3 and 2
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respectively. Interestingly only 3% of the dissatisfactions were presented by the media and the rest came from other sources. From
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time perspective, the
Bank
needed half a year to take necessary actions on those
complaints
in 2001, a month higher than in 2000. It
also
took them 4 months or approximately 5 months in the
next
three years to provide solutions to tackle the existent
complaints
.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also, while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words complaints, bank with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "go" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "go" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Customer service
  • Complaint resolution
  • Data trend
  • Source of complaints
  • Average handling time
  • Online platform
  • Telephone service
  • In-person interactions
  • Efficiency
  • Automated systems
  • Customer satisfaction
  • Bank's reputation
  • Improvements
  • Anomalies
  • Outliers
  • Benchmark
  • Resolution rate
  • Processing time
  • Service channels
  • Feedback mechanism
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