Employers sometimes ask people applying for jobs for personal information, such as their hobbies and interests, and whether they are married or single. Some people say that this information may be relevant and useful, others disagree. Discuss both the views and give your own opinion.

It is quite common in job applying processes that companies ask candidates about personal
information
such
as f
amily relationship
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family, relationship
and what they do in their free time. While there are people that believe these facts are i
mport
Suggestion
imported
to the
company
to know, there are
also
people that believe requiring
this
information
is not correct. Here, I'm going to explain both p
oint
Suggestion
points
of views and
then
address my opinion. On one side of the discussion are people that think it's relevant to know more than just the candidate's professional background. They think knowing
information
such
as hobbies, civil state and family allows the
company
to understand psychological aspects of the candidate.
For instance
, if the candidate seems to be a more sociable person, it tends to have better t
eamworking
skills.
On the other hand
, some people believe companies shouldn't be allowed to ask about personal
information
to candidates applying for a job. They believe t
hese
denotes a person or thing
this
information
could be u
nfaired
reason by deduction; establish by deduction
inferred
unpaired
u
sed
Suggestion
using
against the applicants. A married woman with no children,
for example
, could not be considered for a position just because the
company
i
nfered
having much knowledge or education
informed
she could dream about being a mother soon and use
company
resources for a mother's licence. My personal opinion is that
although
both sides have valid arguments, privacy is a fundamental right. Because of it, I b
elive
accept as true; take to be true
believe
companies should keep the questions to the job a
ppliants
a person who requests or seeks something such as assistance or employment or admission
applicants
applicant's
in the professional field, avoiding them to feel u
nconfortable
conducive to or feeling mental discomfort
uncomfortable
and respecting their personal l
ifes.
a characteristic state or mode of living
lives
life
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • job application
  • personal information
  • hobbies and interests
  • marital status
  • relevant
  • useful
  • privacy
  • assessing candidates
  • qualifications
  • experience
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