Many countries are experience in population growth and need more home. Should these new home be constructed in existing cities or should new town be built in the countryside?

Despite the many countries are growing population day by day and need to build more home. In my opinion, the
government
ought to build a new home
for
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in
the countryside and utilize the area by creating a new
town
. We know that the population is growing rapidly and it takes someplace to their living.
However they
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However, they
prefer
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preferred
to live in
city
side but
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side, but
due to already establish the residential area in the
city
and if
government
constructed more houses in the
city
area, it would be congested and seems like the worst situation to living there.
For example
,
mostly
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most
the acres for housing in 120 to 1000 feet
for
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of
built
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building
the house and it occupies the space with different areas. If the
government
do
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does
plan to build more homes in the same acres in the
city
. It would be a too terrible situation and
also
face many problems.
On the other hand
; One of the benefits of using the countryside areas and built a new
town
with full facilities. Its
look
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looks
awesome because of the clean environment and fresh air without pollution. The
government
create
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creates
is creating
has created
a new
town
with luxury of life as individuals can enjoy more and prefer to live in and
also
many other companies prefer to open their office due to the reason of population.
For example
; Bahira
town
is one the biggest example in front of our eyes as the owner of the
town
built a new
city
full of luxuries with comforts. Most people want to prefer to live in and many other
office
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offices
and industries are existence there.
This
is created more opportunities for job and business setup. In conclusion, while there is an advantage to live in a
city but
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city, but
I believe that the countryside is better than to live in a
city
with the worst environment and face multiple problems.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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