Many people want their country to host an international sporting event. Others believe that international sporting events bring more problems than benefits. Discuss both views and state your opinion.

Citizen people want their
country
to take an international sporting
event
.In
other
any of various alternatives; some other
another
view
,
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others believe that international sport
event
have
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has
more problem than useful issue
.
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In
this
assay
an analytic or interpretive literary composition
essay
I will explain both concepts and give examples and my belief
.
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First
,
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if
country
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the country
takes international sport
event
,
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it will help to increase
fainicial
involving financial matters
financial
support of the
country
.
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Numbers of tourism will rise up
.
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So the hotels will be occupied and other facilities like shopping
,
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,
restaurants
,
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,
etc
continuing in the same way
etc.
will be used more so the investment of the
country
dramatically improve..
Also
this
event
will add history to the
country
and give exceptional name to the
country
.
Second
opinion of
people
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the people
was seen negative point of
this
festival, the number of people will increase and
this
is caused
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is causing
causes
traffic congestion.
Furthermore
noisy pollution
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noisy, pollution
noise pollution
,
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crowded area and may be
crime
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criminalized
.
or
introduces an alternative
Or
frightening In my option I agreed with
first thought cause
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the first thought cause
we need to see different cultures and encourage amazing events and sports
itwill
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it will
help our government
.
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