The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activities in 2010.
The bar chart illustrates regular physical activities performed by
man
and women of different Fix the agreement mistake
men
age
groups. The sample covered are
from Australia during the year 2010.
Correct subject-verb agreement
is
Overall
, at least 40% of the people were involved in regular physical activities with the only exception being males from age
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the age
group
of 35 to 40, which was just under 40 percent
. Within all the Change the spelling
per cent
age
group
covered, apart from Fix the agreement mistake
groups
age
Correct article usage
the age
group
15 to 24, female
percentage Add an article
the female
of
doing physical outnumbered Change preposition
apply
male
percentage in all scenarios. The highest difference Correct article usage
the male
among
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between
male
and Fix the agreement mistake
males
female
is in the Fix the agreement mistake
females
age
group
of 35 to 44, with 13% whereas
, least
difference is in the Correct article usage
the least
age
group
of 65 and over, with 0.4%.
There was
only one Change the verb form
were
instances
where Change to a singular noun
instance
number
of males involved in physical activities were over 50%, which was within the Change the article
a number
the number
age
group
15 to 24 of 52.8%, the same instances for female occurred within three age
groups; 35 to 44 of
52.5%, 45 to 54 of 53.3% and 55 to 64 with 53%.Correct your spelling
or
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Vocabulary: The word "difference" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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