In many places, new homes are needed, but the only space available for building them is in the countryside. Some people believe it is more important to protect the countryside and not build new homes there. What is your opinion about this

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Now a day's Real estate business are play's a major role here. People can't buy a plot in cities, so they prefer the interior places like far away from the cities. Compared to that outside city land costs are cheaper than that, there are many needs which are not
ful filled
completed to perfection
fulfilled
compared to that place. Build our own home are the biggest dream for
everyone specially
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everyone, especially
everyone especially
for the middle class peoples. So most of them prefer to buy a plot outside the cities only, and the same there are many disadvantages are there if everyone think to build a new home in the village it's large impact on the agricultural land and we dramatically spoil those lands. Being a good human it is not really a good move for our future and
childrens
a young person of either sex
children
. It is already started that we are facing
lack
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a lack
of food poverty and those demands. Human consuming food and their daily needs are high it is increasing only and it will never decrease by a growth. My opinion here is that we must keep our villages are clean and healthy atmosphere we never think that to
bulit
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build
built
a
homes
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home
there surely
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there, surely
that earth-land
only give
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only gives
us a healthy food to live here. So we praise as equal to God, at the main point here is that Farmers
also
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face unemployment here, so we need to think and act according. As my personal experience is that, recent days my own village
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now facing a lot of population and pollution, on regular basics peoples are trying garbages to the agricultural land and the good water pond is really affected, the pond that which we are consuming as our daily drinking water source now there is no space or water to do agriculture there.
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is a big human disaster.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Urbanization
  • Ecological benefits
  • Biodiversity conservation
  • Carbon sequestration
  • Sustainable development
  • Eco-friendly building materials
  • Green architecture
  • Government policies
  • Urban sprawl
  • Infrastructure
  • Smart planning
  • Agricultural lands
  • Rural areas
  • Population growth
  • Environmental sensitivity
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