In the past lectures were the traditional method of teaching large numbers of students. Nowadays new technology is increasingly being used to teach students. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this new approach?

Education is a crucial aspect of life theses days and nearly
every body
all people
everybody
tries to get one.
in
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In
the old days traditional class based room learning was the norm things has changed with the new
technology
era and the school are taking a new approach to learning using
technology
,
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this
essay will discuss the
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characterized by or displaying affirmation or acceptance or certainty etc.
positive
and negative sides for using
technology
in education other than
traditinal method
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the traditional method
traditional method
traditional methods
of teaching.
Technology
has made everything easier for the
poeple inculding
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people, including
people inculding
people including
poeple including
teaching, students can now
accsess
the right to enter
access
millions of books with ease because of the new devices that was not available in the past days, students
also
can get information about things in a split
second
all due to the new
technologyies
the practical application of science to commerce or industry
technologies
that was
introduced the past decade
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introduced in the past decade
.
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While there is
alot
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a lot
if positive sides to the new ways of teaching it has a fair share of negative sides
also
; one of them is that the student isn't able to focus when using
defferent
unlike in nature or quality or form or degree
different
kinds of devices
for
example using
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example, using
a tablet during class some students
accsess
the right to enter
access
accuses
accesses
the wrong sites and by that the student is confused in
addtion
a component that is added to something to improve it
addition
technology
introduced home
learing
the cognitive process of acquiring skill or knowledge
learning
approaches so students can learn
whith
expresses the means used
with
the comfort of staying at home
this
has a lot of
down sides
a negative aspect of something that is generally positive
downsides
to it since the student isn't
emrged
come out into view, as from concealment
emerged
merged
in a
laering
darkened by clouds
lowering
enviroment
the totality of surrounding conditions
environment
and won't get the best of information given to him.
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Learning
can be tricky these days with the
technology
so teachers
needs
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need
to be careful with using it, in
conclusion there's
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conclusion, there's
is
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been
good side and bad side to using new methods but the world is opting to
chose
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choose
the new ways over the old
.
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