Every year several languages die out. Some people think this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages. To what extent do u agree or disagree with this opinion.

Annually many

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Annually, many

languages go extinct. Many individuals believe that it is not a big deal as there will be lesser languages and it will make communication easier

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I think that though there are positives in having many languages still the negatives cannot be ignored and I feel languages has to be seen only as

communication medium

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a communication medium

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Having so many languages is simply causing a lot of barriers among people.

Firstly

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The negative of having many languages is that simply you can't communicate with everyone you want. Communication among humans is a basic need and every human loves to communicate and express

themselves but

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themselves, but

due to

language

barriers people of different countries and communities do not understand each other and

miscommunication

have become so familiar.

For

example I

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example, I

went japan

last

month and wanted to buy a diamond ring which

was rare piece

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was a rare piece

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So I told him that I wanted to buy

this

diamond and store keeper said something and show me another shop

...

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...

I tried my best to tell him that "I am here

buy but

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buy, but

by but

by by but

the store owner doesn't understand what I was telling him and he kept showing another shop grocery shop thinking that I am looking for some grocery items..

finally I

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Finally, I

Finally I

could not convince him and get through my message

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So I had

leave

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left

the store empty handed even after Struggling to buy the item for 30 minutes explaining him was all waste time

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The biggest positive about having only one or two languages is that expressing yourself is so easy and there won't be any miscommunication or misunderstanding among people due to wrong interpretation of someone else's

language

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For

instance

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instance, last

last

week I travelled to Australia and attended an exhibition on gem and jewellery and spoke to many like minded people and we I spoke in English without any

language

barrier and was able to make some agreements on future business deals between our companies

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This

shows how on

this

occasion we were able

to make

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making

some

advangeous

giving an advantage

advantageous

decision for companies by using a common

language

. To

conclude I

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conclude, I

believe that advantages in having few languages far

out reaches

the act of reaching out

outreaches

its disadvantages and having few languages is a positive even if some languages go extinct.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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6Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
23Grammar mistakes
 

4 paragraphs

376 words

5.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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Linguistic diversity
Cultural heritage
Endangered languages
Homogenization
Multilingualism
Language preservation
Cognitive benefits
Global communication
Intellectual diversity
Ecological knowledge
Cultural traditions
Communication barriers
Preservation efforts
Technological solutions
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