The world of work is changing rapidly and people cannot depend on the same job or same conditions of work for life. Discuss the possible causes for this rapid change and give your suggestions on how people should prepare for work in the future?

Work is a crucial part of everybody's life, jobs in current state
is changing
Suggestion
are changing
from the past and people are starting to realize that they can'
t
depend on them for the rest of their life
,
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,
this
essay will discuss why
this
change is happening and how people should manage their work in the future
.
Accept space
.
The whole world is rapidly changing because its the era of technology and work
also
falls in
this
category where people can'
t
stay in their
job
safly
with safety; in a safe manner
safely
for a long time due to the fact that employers don'
t
want for
emplyees
a worker who is hired to perform a job
employees
to stay in the organization or their company for long time because they will start asking for raises and they can'
t
afford that in
addtion
a component that is added to something to improve it
addition
to that once they reach a
cetain
definite but not specified or identified
certain
age the workers start to lose motivation so when the manager see's that they directly fire
this
person out of their position. In my opinion a lot of things
needs
Suggestion
need
to be changed
form
a giver or sender
from
the workers them self they need to have a secondary private
job
an online
buisness
a commercial or industrial enterprise and the people who constitute it
business
for
example so
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example, so
they have two
encomes
the financial gain (earned or unearned) accruing over a given period of time
incomes
and don'
t
be
afriad
filled with fear or apprehension
afraid
of going broke if they get fired from their main
job
other thing they need to do to secure them
selfes
your consciousness of your own identity
selves
building connections with other employers so if they lose their current
job
you can get hired
else where
in or to another place
elsewhere
. In
conculsion i
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conclusion, I
conculsion I
conclusion I
conclusion i
think work
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think, work
and jobs these days is not a safe choice for most people and
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
think that they need to look at it as if its temporary thing and secure them
selfes
your consciousness of your own identity
selves
with private
job
that they can depend on.
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