the chart below shows the percentage of people who ate five portions of fruit and vegetables per day in the UK from 2001 to 2008. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

the chart below shows the percentage of people who ate five portions of fruit and vegetables per day in the UK from 2001 to 2008. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates the
proportion
of women, men and
children
consuming five servings of
fruit
and
vegetables
each day in 8 years from 2001 to 2008 in the UK.
Overall
, it can be seen that the highest percentage of all people consuming
fruit
and
vegetables
was women,
while
children
consistently accounted for the lowest
proportion
.
Furthermore
, a significant increase in the
proportion
of people eating these food items can be seen over the period given. The percentage of women who ate
fruit
and
vegetables
started at just over 20% in 2001.
This
figure
the
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rose steadily to reach a peak of almost 35% in 2006, before falling slightly to 30% in the final year. In terms of men and
children
eating
fruit
and
vegetables
, the rate remained relatively stable in the first three years (about 17% and 12% respectively). From
this
point, the
proportion
of men climbed gradually to peak at about 27%in both 2006 and 2007, after which it dropped to about 26%.
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growth in the figure for
children
was evident reaching 25% in 2007 and around 24% in the final year.

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