Some people believe that teenagers should concentrate on all subjects, while few believe that they should only focus on subjects they are good at. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
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firstly
, take a look at both sides of the argument and reach a reasonable conclusion.
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, most of the colleges and universities are providing education
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knowledge, especially
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in
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particular subjects
subject
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the future
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the burden
subject
. This
has resulted in pshychological
stress and economical crisis among mental or emotional as opposed to physical in nature
psychological
myraid
of youngsters.
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such
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educational
employement
the state of being employed or having a job
employment
oppertunity
and professionalism. a possibility due to a favorable combination of circumstances
opportunity
However
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on particular subject
far outwiegh
the be heavier than
outweigh
benfits
of financial assistance in time of need
benefits
benefit
education
on every subjects
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subject
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