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The chart below shows the number of men and women in further education in Britain in three periods and whether they were studying fulltime or part-time. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. T1 Bar Charts - EducationT

The chart below shows the number of men and women in further education in Britain in three periods and whether they were studying fulltime or part-time. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. T1 Bar Charts - EducationT
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The bar charts illustrate, how many male and female
student
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students
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 were enrolled in tertiary
education
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 and ,whether, they were
receiveing
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receiving
 full-time or part-time
education
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 in
Britan
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Britain
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 in three time
period
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periods
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 as follow 1970-71, 1980-81,
1990
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and 1990
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-91.
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,
it is clear that
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male
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males
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 and
female
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females
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receiveing
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receiving
 full-time
education
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 were greater in number throughout these three periods and female full-time
education
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recivers
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receivers
 numbers increase sharply,
while
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part-time
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the part-time
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 study was less popular among male and female
students
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 in these periods. With respect to full-time
eduction
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education
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 in 1970-
71
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,71
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 almost one million men were studying full-time,
while
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 , only around thirty to
fourty
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forty
 thousand part-time
students
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 were present.
On the other hand
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, females
receiveing
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receiving
 full-time
education
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 were seventy
lacs
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 and those
receiveing
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receiving
 part-time
education
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 were around twenty thousand only. In the following period (1980-81)
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the numbers
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numbers
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number
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 of full-time
students
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 dropped down to
ninty
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ninety
lacs
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 ,
while
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, female numbers increased from sixty to eighty
lacs
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. Male and
female
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females
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revceiveing
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receiving
 part-time
eduction
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education
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were
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was
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fourty
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forty
 and fifty thousand respectively. In the final period of 1990-91
number
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the number
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 of
female
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females
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receiveing
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receiving
 full-time
education
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 dramatically increased to 1.1 million highest of all studies and all periods,
while
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male
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the male
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students
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 number remained
same
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the same
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 at around eighty
lacs
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. Those
receiveing
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receiving
 part-time
education
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 were about fifteen and twenty
lacs
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, respectively.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words education, students, lacs with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "numbers of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
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