The chart below shows the number of men and women in further education in Britain in three periods and whether they were studying fulltime or part-time. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. T1 Bar Charts - EducationT
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The bar charts illustrate, how many male and female
student
were enrolled in tertiary Fix the agreement mistake
students
education
and ,whether, they were receiveing
full-time or part-time Correct your spelling
receiving
education
in Britan
in three time Correct your spelling
Britain
period
as follow 1970-71, 1980-81, Fix the agreement mistake
periods
1990
-91.
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and 1990
Overall
, it is clear that
male
and Fix the agreement mistake
males
female
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females
receiveing
full-time Correct your spelling
receiving
education
were greater in number throughout these three periods and female full-time education
recivers
numbers increase sharply, Correct your spelling
receivers
while
part-time
study was less popular among male and female Add an article
the part-time
students
in these periods.
With respect to full-time eduction
in 1970-Correct your spelling
education
71
almost one million men were studying full-time, Add a comma
,71
while
, only around thirty to fourty
thousand part-time Correct your spelling
forty
students
were present. On the other hand
, females receiveing
full-time Correct your spelling
receiving
education
were seventy lacs
and those receiveing
part-time Correct your spelling
receiving
education
were around twenty thousand only.
In the following period (1980-81) Correct article usage
the numbers
numbers
of full-time Fix the agreement mistake
number
students
dropped down to ninty
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ninety
lacs
, while
, female numbers increased from sixty to eighty lacs
. Male and female
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females
revceiveing
part-time Correct your spelling
receiving
eduction
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education
were
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was
fourty
and fifty thousand respectively.
In the final period of 1990-91 Correct your spelling
forty
number
of Correct article usage
the number
female
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females
receiveing
full-time Correct your spelling
receiving
education
dramatically increased to 1.1 million highest of all studies and all periods,while
male
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the male
students
number remained same
at around eighty Correct article usage
the same
lacs
. Those receiveing
part-time Correct your spelling
receiving
education
were about fifteen and twenty lacs
, respectively.Submitted by danialhassan95 on
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