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Many families move to different countries. Some people think children can benefits from this, while other consider it is hard for children if families move to a foreign country. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Some people believe that it is difficult for children to migrate to other countries. Others,
however
, believe that it will be advantageous for children if families will move to
other
any of various alternatives; some other
another
 nation. In my view, moving to a foreign nation with families is beneficial for children. On the one hand, those who believe that it is hard for children to migrate to other countries might argue, that it can lead to loneliness and bullying for children.
This
 is because of the language barriers.
For example
, many children are finding it hard to make new friends and to participate in school, because they do not speak the same language which make it difficult for them to understand other children,
As a result
, they might be bullied and become unhappy
in
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with
 their new environment and might lead to a longer period of adjustment in their new surroundings’.
On the other hand
, my view is that, moving to
other
any of various alternatives; some other
another
 nation is beneficial for
youngster
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the youngster
youngsters
a youngster
 as it
open
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opens
 many opportunities for them
such
 as better education and quality life.
For Instance
, many
develop
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developing
 countries provide high quality standard education, If children will study and finish their school, they might have a higher chance to get a better job in various
field
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fields
 resulting to a quality life in the future. Another example is, if the family has lack of
financial
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finances
financing
finance
 to support their
children
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children's
child's
 schooling, Children will receive financial support from the government by granting student loan and repay once they graduated and get a better job. In conclusion,
although
 migrating to other countries is difficult for children. It is my firm believe, that it is advantageous and has a long term benefit for them.

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