The birth rate in most developed countries is predicted to begin to fall over the next 50 years. By 2030 it is estimated that over one third of the population in most developed countries will be aged 65 and over. What effects will these predictions have on developed countries if they prove true? What can be done now to deal with this situation?

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, most of people worry about over-population and living crowded cities even though it is predicted that we will have

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the opposite problem

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by the year 2030 when one

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of the population will be aged 65 or over

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rates are predicted to decline. There will be some bad consequences of

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and from now on

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countries should take precautions. Developed countries’ economies will have been

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significantly by the 2030 because of declining rate of workers’ population with increasing of rate of 65 aged and over population. To be more precise labour force will have weakened, more less employees will be working actively. There will be some consequences of that issue

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as fewer people will be paying income tax, to compensate tax loss governments are going to have

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tax ratios. Parallel to drop of labour loss, fewer researcher will be in early future, result of technological improvements will be slowing down and naturally that will effect negatively manufacturing and new production sectors. Falling of

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rate issue should be

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a governments’ priority

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should realise threatens from now and produce convenient policies.

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can encourage young parents to have more children. They can give some privileges

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as discount taxes or

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aid money or states can fund those children education costs

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university.

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thing states can do is to choose capable and brilliant employees from developing countries and to ease to migrate them to developed countries.

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, declining of

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rates is a severe

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of developed countries, governments should take immediate action to avoid the

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