Study shows that many criminals have a low level education. For this reason, some people believe that the best way to reduce crime is to educate people in prison, so that they can get a job when they leave prison. Do you agree or disagree?

The number of crimes recorded in the past few years has greatly increased

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all over

the world.If we talk about the developing countries like Pakistan, India, Bangladesh

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continuing in the same way

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it is seen that many young people are involved in serious crimes like drug dealing, gang rape,

robbies

an acute viral disease of the nervous system of warm-blooded animals (usually transmitted by the bite of a rabid animal); rabies is fatal if the virus reaches the brain

rabies

rabbis

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and other street crimes. In many cases it is observed that the criminals have

low level

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low levels

a low level

of education. Education can be considered as

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of the strongest reasons out of the other major reasons that include poverty

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habitual act of

crime

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or bad company. Low level of education

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lead

to frustration and

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anxiety, specially

while not finding a reasonable job to earn basic bread and butter for

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's family.

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leads to a man thinking about easier means to earn.Committing a

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is considered far

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easier

than finding a job for most uneducated people.Education expands the

abillity

the quality of being able to perform; a quality that permits or facilitates achievement or accomplishment

ability

to find ways and

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to a distinctly greater extent or degree than is common

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helps in

recoginizing

accept (someone) to be what is claimed or accept his power and authority

recognizing

recognising

the difference between right and wrong. An educated person might find it difficult to commit a

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as he or she has the ability to think for possible and

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most suitable

means to earn rather than becoming a criminal.Family backgrounds and lifestyle of educated people will never encourage

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wrong activities. I would agree with people who believe that the best way to reduce

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is to educate criminals in the

prison

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will prove helpful for them to find a decent job when they leave the

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.Educating criminals in the

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will give them a chance to think

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positively

about themselves. It will help them to change their mindset. Education helps you to think out of the box,

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these people will think of different opportunities that never crossed their mind.It will help them to act and think wisely.They will be utilizing their time more effectively in

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way. I believe if a person finds a suitable means of earning that helps him or her to fulfil the basic needs, no

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would ever think of committing a

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opinion, no

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would like to waste the precious years of their life in

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if they have enough to feed themselves and their loved ones.

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end, I

would agree that education will prove to be a

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stone post at side of a road to show distances

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in changing the mindsets of the people in

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and especially help them to lead a reasonable decent life after completing their term in the

prison

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