In many countries, very few young people read newspapers or follow the news on TV. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Younger generation of so many countries, reluctant to get news on television and newspapers. In my

opinion both

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opinion, both

availability of

internet

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and personal disinterest towards the paper and news channels are the possible causes. The trend can be modified by restricting online life and focussed guidance. In

this

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contemporary era, younger people are not very much leaning towards getting information through television and newspapers.

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of all, owing to ease of

world wide web

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the world wide web

on mobile phones all younger people spend their most of time on social networking site.

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internet

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the internet

easy source

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an easy source

of information including sports, entertainment and politics.

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, younger one get live news instantly without any hastle.

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, in a study conducted by WHO in 2016,

revealed

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Revealed

that more than 80 percentages of persons of age group below 30 years, utilises their half of the working time on net based smart phones.

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new generation

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a new generation

the new generation

is living online life,

thus

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they are not interested to read

newspaper

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and watch

news

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the news

on television. For

instant

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an instant

, in INDIA more than 60 percentages of people who had never read

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newspaper

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newspapers

and seen news broadcast

are

a particular geographical region of indefinite boundary (usually serving some special purpose or distinguished by its people or culture or geography)

area

of below 25 years in one study. Information on

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internet

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the internet

is many times misleading and unreliable. Possible solutions to increase, utilising information on

news channels

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the news channels

and daily

news papers

a daily or weekly publication on folded sheets; contains news and articles and advertisements

newspapers

are, to halt

internet

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usage by restricting few

malacious

having the nature of or resulting from malice

malicious

sites and reducing data usage per day.

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, younger people should be encouraged to read newspapers by organising

quizes

an examination consisting of a few short questions

quizzes

at school level based on

newspaper

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data and

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data, and

they should

also

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get proper parental guidance and atmosphere to watch news channels at home. For instant, few schools

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Delhi regularly arrange

intraschool

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competition of general knowledge to encourage proper utilisation of

newspaper

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and news broadcast. To conclude, the decline in

number

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the number

a number

of younger ones to read

newspaper

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and watch news channels should be taken seriously.

Habit

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The habit

of spending most of the time online and less interest towards traditional modes of news sources an be modified by proper guidance at school and parental support.

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

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In many countries, very few young people read newspapers or follow the news on TV. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Fully explain your ideas

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