There have been some problems with the public transport you use to commute daily. Write a letter to the manager of the public transport company. In your letter: describe the problems explain how these problems are affecting you and others suggest what could be done about it
The noun phrase unmanageable and unavoidable situation seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article.
It seems that situation may not agree in number with other words in this phrase.
It seems that preposition use may be incorrect here.
To hail doesn’t seem to work here.
It seems that condition may not agree in number with other words in this phrase.
The verb look appears to be in the subjunctive mood. Consider removing the particle to.
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.
‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.