There have been some problems with the public transport you use to commute daily. Write a letter to the manager of the public transport company. In your letter: describe the problems explain how these problems are affecting you and others suggest what could be done about it

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to express my discontent regarding the bus service, provided by your company in our
area
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. The service is extremely terrible which has created
unmanageable
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an unmanageable
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and unavoidable
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in the
area
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of my residence. My name is Sunny and I live in Salmiya, Block 10. The
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is on the outskirts of the city. The residents of the
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, including me, are daily commuters of the bus service provided by your establishment.
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, during the
last
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few weeks, your
buses
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are making reoccurring delays and
that is
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affecting our arrival at the workplace. To add more grief, some
buses
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are not coming at all, resulting
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of us
to hail
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a taxi to reach our office. Sometimes,
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situation forces me and some other commuters to take congested
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and stand all the way in miserable
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to reach our office. I suggest you
to
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look into
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issue and add few more
buses
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in our
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. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully Sunny Bhat
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