Some people think that it is too difficult for poor people or people from rural areas to go to university. So that the universities should make it especially easy for them. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

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In these days, higher institute

are become

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is becoming

is become

important for

human

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humanity

to gain knowledge

for

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their working

life but

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life, but

it is

opine

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opined

by few masses that it is hard

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for

poor people which belong to

country side area

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the country side area

to go to university. So the higher institute must make it easy for them. I completely agree with

this

statement because poor people

also

need to increase their knowledge

for get

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for getting

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job

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the job

a job

easily.

To begin

with, the major reason why it must be easier because until now a lot of human still not get good education which is education are really important for someone and they do not get the education because they do not have money for pay the fees so

that is

why universities must help them with giving them cheaper fee or free fee until they get a degree and can get a job which can help them to live their life.

For example

, if they get free fee until they get degree from the course they are studying in

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so it can help poor people

to get

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get

job

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jobs

a job

the job

easily which can reduce the number of unemployment people in the country in

this

case many people can live their life happily with their family. Moving

further

, another reason

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most of the university are located in the city which is very far for people who are living in rural areas and

also

they are

poor so

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poor, so

they do not have money to pay the transportation which can bring them to the higher institute. For

this

reason

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the higher opportunity must build universities in every rural areas which can help them to study there and

also

it will help the poor people to save their money because they do not have to pay for transportation. In conclusion, every human whatever they are rich or poor must study and gain more knowledge because it is so beneficial for them and with the help of the government it will be easier for poor people to study in the universities

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Fri Jan 03 2020

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Topic Vocabulary:

barriers
limited access
financial constraints
equality and diversity
comprehensive approaches
scholarships
mentorship programs
academic support
root causes
maintaining academic standards
fairness
merit-based
inclusive higher education system
social and economic benefits
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Some people think that it is too difficult for poor people or people from rural areas to go to university. So that the universities should make it especially easy for them. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

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It has been argued that we are living in a throw-away society in which people throw away what they use in daily life, instead of recycling or reusing it. Why has this happened and how can we address this problem?

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