Some people think that it is too difficult for poor people or people from rural areas to go to university. So that the universities should make it especially easy for them. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

In these days, higher institute
are become
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is becoming
is become
important for
human
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humanity
to gain knowledge
for
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of
their working
life but
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life, but
it is
opine
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opined
by few masses that it is hard
to
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for
poor people which belong to
country side area
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the country side area
to go to university. So the higher institute must make it easy for them. I completely agree with
this
statement because poor people
also
need to increase their knowledge
for get
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for getting
forget
job
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the job
a job
easily.
To begin
with, the major reason why it must be easier because until now a lot of human still not get good education which is education are really important for someone and they do not get the education because they do not have money for pay the fees so
that is
why universities must help them with giving them cheaper fee or free fee until they get a degree and can get a job which can help them to live their life.
For example
, if they get free fee until they get degree from the course they are studying in
,
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,
so it can help poor people
to get
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get
job
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jobs
a job
the job
easily which can reduce the number of unemployment people in the country in
this
case many people can live their life happily with their family. Moving
further
, another reason
are
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is
most of the university are located in the city which is very far for people who are living in rural areas and
also
they are
poor so
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poor, so
they do not have money to pay the transportation which can bring them to the higher institute. For
this
reason
,
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,
the higher opportunity must build universities in every rural areas which can help them to study there and
also
it will help the poor people to save their money because they do not have to pay for transportation. In conclusion, every human whatever they are rich or poor must study and gain more knowledge because it is so beneficial for them and with the help of the government it will be easier for poor people to study in the universities
.
Accept space
.

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