: Pollution of rivers, lakes and seas is a major concern for people who seek to protect the environment. What are the possible causes of water pollution, and what effects does this have on animal life and human society?

The chart illustrates the four p
urposes why
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purposes, why
many people visited to Britain:
Theme
Parks, Museums and Galleries, Historic Houses and Monuments and Wildlife parks and Zoo and five of the most visited places in
Theme
Parks in 1999. Overall, the people's most of reason to visit Britain was
Theme
Parks Museum& Galleries,
In addition
the highest percentage of the place where the most people went in
Theme
Parks is Blackpool Pleasure Beach. In pie graph, the biggest parts of c
ircle
Suggestion
a circle
the circle
are amusement park(
3
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(
8%) and Art galleries and Museum(
3
Accept space
(
7%) which had just 1 difference percentage between them. The smallest part of purpose to visit Britain is f
or
Suggestion
in
Wildlife Park and watch some animals in the zoo which had only nine percentage.
In addition
, t
he bigger
Suggestion
bigger
than smallest part is Historic Houses and Monuments.
On the other hand
, the most famous place to tour in
Theme
Parks is Blackpool Pleasure Beach(
4
Accept space
(
7%) that had almost around 50%. The l
east
immediately past
last
figure of popular places to visit are Chessington World of Adventures(
1
Accept space
(
0%) and Legoland, Windsor(
1
Accept space
(
0%) which had s
ame level
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the same level
of n
umber.
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numbness
numbering
Furthermore
, The higher numbers than the least figure of p
opular places
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the popular places
are Alton Towers and Pleasureland, Southport that had 17% and 16% respectively and difference between them are only 1%.

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