Many people are using credit cards or loans to run up huge personal debts that they may be unable to repay. It should therefore be made more difficult for individuals to borrow large amounts of money. What are you opinions on this?

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A lot of people are becoming bankrupt due to huge loans and over exhaustion of their
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cards these days, and to tackle
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scenario, many people believe, borrowing huge amounts of money must be made very difficult. I personally have mixed opinions on
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topic and feel the present rules of sanctioning loans or
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cards have their own benefits and drawbacks. Many people, especially younger ones who recently joined their
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job are becoming the victims of bankruptcy in the present. The main reason for
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is the easy availability of
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cards and loans from various banks with high
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limits, which are way far from their regular monthly salaries. The present guidelines for
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card or
loan
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sanction are so broad that, even a person with a mediocre salary can borrow a huge sum of cash which he can hardly pay.
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, according to present rules and regulations, a person with a monthly salary of Rs.15,000 is eligible for a
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card with a maximum limit of Rs.45,000 which is 3 times his/her own monthly earning, and young people these days are getting used to the luxuries which they can't afford and are ending up with a huge debt,
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making it important to change the guidelines and making it difficult lending huge amounts of money.
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, some people usually take huge loans due to some grave difficulties that they face,
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, paying the hospital bills of a severely ill family member, which is really costly and most of the middle class people can't afford them. So, utilizing the present
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sanctioning rules, one can procure enough cash to save his family member. Not only in the case medical bills, but
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in other situations like paying college fees of their kids or starting up their own dream business etc.
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, making it difficult to lend huge amounts of cash can be a curse to some people who are in desperate financial need. In conclusion, in my opinion,
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, easy availability of huge loans and
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cards can have both advantages and disadvantages, but a change has to be brought in
loan
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lending methods, which is, the cause of the
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should be considered and should be thoroughly assessed before sanctioning it.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • financial literacy
  • credit cards
  • loans
  • debts
  • mental health
  • well-being
  • stringent checks
  • balances
  • repaying
  • reckless spending
  • living beyond one's means
  • financial destabilization
  • regulations
  • cap (verb)
  • income
  • financial commitments
  • mandatory financial education
  • financial decisions
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