Some people think that mobile phones should be banned in public places like libraries, shop and on public transport. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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Advancements in telecommunication technology
has brought
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have brought
a serious impact on the routine activities of a person. It is thought by some that using cell phones at public spots
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as libraries, shops and public transport should be prohibited. In my opinion, while
i
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I
believe that in today's
world mobile
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world, mobile
phones are the essential part of everyones life,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
agree that its
use
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must be banned
atleast
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at least
at
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in
some public places. Currently, mobile phones are considered as one of
the quick
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the quickest
and easiest way of communication, but
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is
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giving rise to many ethical and safety issues.
the
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The
continuous
use
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of mobile phone makes a person unable to realise that when and where not to
use
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this
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device.
For instance
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, using cell phone in libraries is against the ethics of the society.
Consequently
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, the disturbance created by the presence of the mobile phones completely destroys the fundamental concept behind the
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of libraries and
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to provide quiet and peaceful environment to the readers.
On the other hand
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, the excessive
use
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of mobile phones
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is
dangerous for the life of a person as well.
For example
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, the
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of mobile phones while driving results
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into
some serious
consequnces
a phenomenon that follows and is caused by some previous phenomenon
consequences
consequence
. Over the past few years, many horrible traffic accidents were reported and the figures
are going
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go
high day by day. Simil

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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