These days, many people have their own computer and telephone, so it is quite easy for them to do their job at home. Does working at home have more advantages or more disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge. Write at least 250 words.

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Nowadays, a lot of people have

opportunity

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the opportunity

an opportunity

work

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from home

becouse

for the reason that; on account of

because

a big part of duty can be

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done

remoutly

in a remote manner

remotely

. And almost everyone

ownes

belonging to or on behalf of a specified person (especially yourself); preceded by a possessive

owns

owned

a PC and a

cellphone

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cell phone

. In my opinion people will

work

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office

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the office

less in the future and I am glad about it. If people live in

countryside

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the countryside

or in

big city

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a big city

big cities

the big city

, they have to spend hours to get to job and back home. I live in

villidge neably city

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a village nearby city

villidge nearby city

the village nearby city

village nearby cities

village neably city

village nearby city

where my

office

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locates. I lost two hours per day,

that is

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almost five hundred hours per year. It is a huge

coutn

(film) a still picture that is introduced and that interrupts the action of a film

cut-in

curtain

count

of time. I would like to spend

this

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time in

enather

any of various alternatives; some other

another

way, but

refers to the speaker or writer

can not. My boss does not let

objective form of "I"

work

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from home. From company

view it

Accept comma addition

view, it

is more cheaper. They should not support a big

office

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for all staff. Several

emploers

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Employers

Employees

Emploers

have to be in

front

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the front office

office

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for example

Linking Words

, but a the biggest size of

Use synonyms

work

Suggestion

the work

is done online.

Also

Linking Words

company can invite worker from

everywere

to or in any or all places

everywhere

. In

this

Linking Words

case they can find

the better

Suggestion

the best

worker for the

smoller

small or little relative to something else

smaller

similar

money. For company I can see only

profe

any factual evidence that helps to establish the truth of something

proof

prof

profit

Lile

Suggestion

disadvangage

the quality of having an inferior or less favorable position

disadvantage

I would have to say that co-workers interact less. And for someone, who live alone and does not have friends, it can be a problem. Whatever I think it is very good idea

remout

located far away spatially

remote

job. From one side workers save their time, from other side companies save

theyr

of them or themselves

their

money.

Everbody

Suggestion

Everybody

is happy. So people will find way to live and

work

Use synonyms

more convinion

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

5.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

252 words

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Some people believe that those moving abroad should try to adapt themselves to the new cultures. While some think that there is no need to do so. Discuss both view and give ur opinion.

Some people feel that the primary function of a university should be to prepare students for the working world. Others argue that the purpose of a university education is to provide knowledge for knowledge’s sake. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

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Task 1: The number of vehicles registered for use between 1996 and 2006 in a European country. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Millions of dollars are spent on space research every year. Some people argue that the money should be spent on improving living standards on earth. Do you agree or disagree?