some people believe that adults get motivated to exercise and play sports because of the major sports events on tv such as olympic games and football world cup.Others believe that there are many ways apart from tv to encourage them to exercise.Discuss both view and give your own opinion.

#people #adults #exercise #sports #events #tv #olympic #games #football #world #cup

is believe

Suggestion

is believed

by some people that some adults are motivated to

exercise

and play sports events

Accept space

while others believe that there are

variety

Suggestion

varying

varied

ways

adukts

a fully developed person from maturity onward

adults

can motivation to

exercise

.I believe that the others ways of

exercise

can

motivated

Suggestion

motivate

adults to

exercise

Although

Accept space

people believe that

adolecents

a juvenile between the onset of puberty and maturity

adolescents

get their motivation and play sports by watching

major sports event

Suggestion

major sports events

on tv because they can know and aware about their teams quest for success

also

get to see role models playing sports on television.

However

Accept space

refers to the speaker or writer

do not think that it is the only effective way to inspire

adolecents

a juvenile between the onset of puberty and maturity

adolescents

or others. In my point of view

Accept space

there are other several ways to impel grown-up people to

exercise

which

refers to the speaker or writer

totally agree with that.

Gyming

Accept space

yoga

Accept space

martial arts

Accept space

awmming

a canopy made of canvas to shelter people or things from rain or sun

awning

owning

Accept space

cycling

Accept space

walking and climbing

Accept space

these are the alternatives of watching tv and get impel.By joining fitness club adults can do their

exercise

(

Accept space

(

free hand

exerice

the activity of exerting your muscles in various ways to keep fit

exercises

exercise

Accept space

yoga

Accept space

martial arts

)

Accept space

)

these gymnastics helps them to keep fit physically

also

mentally cause it will will remain your body active

Accept space

energatic

possessing or exerting or displaying energy

energetic

Accept space

fruitful and refresh your mind which is

mendatory

required by rule

mandatory

for all mankind.

In addition

Accept space

not

anly

and nothing more

only

gymnastics but

Accept comma addition

gymnastics, but

also

healthy diet is very significant to lead healthy-wealthy lifestyle.Everyone should do their proper diet and maintain

accurately

Suggestion

accuracy

.Following these all

instrcutions

a manual usually accompanying a technical device and explaining how to install or operate it

instructions

adults can have a goo lifestyle. In conclusion

Accept space

adults get

motivation

Suggestion

motivated

exercise

from watching sports programmes or any others

sources but

Accept comma addition

sources, but

I believe that adults can more inspiration from other several ways rather than watching tv.They can try both

source but

Suggestion

sources, but

sources but

second

one is more effective for all mankind.

Sat Jan 04 2020

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Fully explain your ideas

To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

Paragraph 1 - Introduction

Sentence 1 - Background statement
Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
Sentence 3 - Thesis
Sentence 4 - Outline sentence

Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph

Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
Sentence 2 - Example
Sentence 3 - Discussion
Sentence 4 - Conclusion

Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph

Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
Sentence 2 - Example
Sentence 3 - Discussion
Sentence 4 - Conclusion

Paragraph 4 - Conclusion

Sentence 1 - Summary
Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

Do you want to check your IELTS essays?

Submit unlimited essays, letters and charts. Sign up right now and start improving your writing skills.

5Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
39Grammar mistakes
 

4 paragraphs

240 words

<4

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

🚀 Prepare for IELTS writing section today!

Unlimited Task 1 checks
Get all the feedback you need to keep improving your charts and letters.
Unlimited Task 2 checks
Practice and perfect your skills with essays.
Personalized suggestions
Know how to boost your score.
Detailed mistakes analysis
Get instant feedback. Spot every mistake.
Topic ideas generator
Get topic-specific ideas to enhance your writing.
Vocabulary helper
Get the right words for any topic.
Progress tracking
Track your writing improvements.

What to do next:

Look at other essays:

4
band
some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things .other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. discuss both views and give your own opinion
Some people argues that advertising is highly successful for convincing us to buy things , while the other people opine that advertising is so regular that we no longer pay attention to buy things.IN this essay,I am going to express my view about thhis argument and deliver my point of view.
6.5
band
Some people say that now we can see films on our phones or tablets, and there is no need to go to the cinema. Others say that to be fully enjoyed, films need to be seen in a cinema. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
In this contemporary epoch, a certain number of individuals believe that all the sources to watch movies are available at home like phones and laptops while skeptics say it is vital to watch the film in cinema to fully enjoy it. This scenario has sparked controversy, with both advocates and critics representing valid arguments. This essay will delve into both views and will subsequently provide a conclusion.
7
band
Some people believe that educating people about the natural world is the most effective way to protect the environment. Other say there are more effective ways to protect the environment. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
There is a belief that taking care of the environment will be successful if people are educated about the natural world. On the other hand, there are many alternatives for protecting the environment. In this essay, I will present those two ideas and give my opinion on them.
6.5
band
It is often quoted, “When in Rome, do as Romans do.” Is it right that when people visit a different country, they should follow the culture of the country they visit? Do you think culture can be accepted without learning the language?
Cultural sensitivity is often considered to be crucial by some, when visiting a country. In my point of view, I believe that accepting and adapting to the mores of a host state makes the journey far more joyful as well and I am of the opinion that devoid of speech awareness is a great barrier to exploring the culture of the destination.
5
band
You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic: In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?
In these days, some people are prefer buying a house than renting one because, it will be asset in their lifetime. On the contrary, some people choosing to rent the house or flat as it is cheaper and flexible. This essay will discuss positive and negative factor of both sides.

some people believe that adults get motivated to exercise and play sports because of the major sports events on tv such as olympic games and football world cup.Others believe that there are many ways apart from tv to encourage them to exercise.Discuss both view and give your own opinion.

Fully explain your ideas

some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things .other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. discuss both views and give your own opinion

Some people say that now we can see films on our phones or tablets, and there is no need to go to the cinema. Others say that to be fully enjoyed, films need to be seen in a cinema. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

Some people believe that educating people about the natural world is the most effective way to protect the environment. Other say there are more effective ways to protect the environment. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

It is often quoted, “When in Rome, do as Romans do.” Is it right that when people visit a different country, they should follow the culture of the country they visit? Do you think culture can be accepted without learning the language?

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic: In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?