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some people believe that adults get motivated to exercise and play sports because of the major sports events on tv such as olympic games and football world cup.Others believe that there are many ways apart from tv to encourage them to exercise.Discuss both view and give your own opinion.

#people #adults #exercise #sports #events #tv #olympic #games #football #world #cup
It
is believe
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is believed
 by some people that some adults are motivated to
exercise
 and play sports events
,
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,
while others believe that there are
variety
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varying
varied
 ways
adukts
a fully developed person from maturity onward
adults
 can motivation to
exercise
.I believe that the others ways of
exercise
 can
motivated
Suggestion
motivate
 adults to
exercise
.
Although
,
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,
people believe that
adolecents
a juvenile between the onset of puberty and maturity
adolescents
 get their motivation and play sports by watching
major sports event
Suggestion
major sports events
 on tv because they can know and aware about their teams quest for success
also
 get to see role models playing sports on television.
However
,
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,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
 do not think that it is the only effective way to inspire
adolecents
a juvenile between the onset of puberty and maturity
adolescents
 or others. In my point of view
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,
there are other several ways to impel grown-up people to
exercise
 which
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
 totally agree with that.
Gyming
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,
yoga
,
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,
martial arts
,
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,
awmming
a canopy made of canvas to shelter people or things from rain or sun
awning
owning
,
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,
cycling
,
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,
walking and climbing
,
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,
these are the alternatives of watching tv and get impel.By joining fitness club adults can do their
exercise
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(
free hand
exerice
the activity of exerting your muscles in various ways to keep fit
exercises
exercise
,
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,
yoga
,
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,
martial arts
)
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)
these gymnastics helps them to keep fit physically
also
 mentally cause it will will remain your body active
,
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,
energatic
possessing or exerting or displaying energy
energetic
,
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,
fruitful and refresh your mind which is
mendatory
required by rule
mandatory
 for all mankind.
In addition
,
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,
not
anly
and nothing more
only
gymnastics but
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gymnastics, but
also
 healthy diet is very significant to lead healthy-wealthy lifestyle.Everyone should do their proper diet and maintain
accurately
Suggestion
accuracy
.Following these all
instrcutions
a manual usually accompanying a technical device and explaining how to install or operate it
instructions
 adults can have a goo lifestyle. In conclusion
,
Accept space
,
adults get
motivation
Suggestion
motivated
 to
exercise
 from watching sports programmes or any others
sources but
Accept comma addition
sources, but
 I believe that adults can more inspiration from other several ways rather than watching tv.They can try both
source but
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sources, but
sources but
second
 one is more effective for all mankind.

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