Nowadays, people work too hard. What is the reason for this? What should employers do to prevent employees from overworking?
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availability of jobs in the market is another important factor for long working hours. The executive role is to develop a healthy working environment so that people should work without any strain.
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keeps on working hard in order to satisfy their management. They tend to work long hours to achieve their targets. Suggestion
the staff
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, in a recent research published by COMSATS University it was explained that approximately half of the employees prefer to work long hours just because they are afraid of being fired.
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, but it is the core responsibility of employers to keep the motivation level of workforce high. They are required to play the role of a leader and lead their team in a way to achieve pUse synonyms
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goals. The boost is motivation level would result in pSuggestion
productivity
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positive developments
staff
.Use synonyms
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite