One way to reduce the problem of traffic congestion is by increasing the tax on private vehicles. Do you think this is a feasible solution?

Traffic congestion is

major cause

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a major cause

the major cause

of various daily problems

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as, higher travelling hours, global warming, increased petrol consumption, rampant pollution. Increasing tax on private vehicles is one of the suggested solution which can be perceived either

ways

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way

. Increased taxes on private vehicles, would not only encourage the

usage

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use

of public

transport

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, but

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the incremental tax money could be used, to improve the public

transport

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services and

reasearching

systematic investigation to establish facts

researching

resourcing

on better solutions to handle traffic. It would

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encourage people to opt for healthier ways to travel

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as cycling.

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, in few

coutries many

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countries, many

countries many

people use cycles as their main mode

transport

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. A recent study has

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shown, higher taxes on private vehicles has not only helped to reduce the pollution and traffic levels, but

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boosted the health of the citizens which resulted in better

producitvity

the quality of being productive or having the power to produce

productivity

and economic

yeild

be the cause or source of

yield

.

Eventhough

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Even though

higher taxes would help the public

transport

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, it would lead decline in private

vehicular

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vehicle

sales, leading to many job losses.

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Also it

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Also, it

would be

inconvinient

not suited to your comfort, purpose or needs

inconvenient

for the commoner deprived of

private vehicle

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a private vehicle

private vehicles

to use public

transport

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for every small need. Higher reliance on public

transport

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would

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create a pressure on the government to

constatnly

without variation or change, in every case

constantly

improve and increase the

facitilites

a building or place that provides a particular service or is used for a particular industry

facilities

based on the demands. Recently there were many cases where, many

activitist

any specific behavior

activities

went out streets voicing the lack of public

transport

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and threatening to overthrow the government for the same. In conclusion, increased tax seems to be feasible only when government equally reciprocates to cover the needs created by it, people are willing to take the leap towards a better future and both support the transition in

gradual manner

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a gradual manner

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