You and some friends ate a meal at a restaurant to celebrate a special occasion, and you were very pleased with the food and service. Write a letter to the restaurant manager. In your letter: - give details of your visit to the restaurant - explain the reason for the celebration - say what was good about the food and the service

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to provide a compliment on the
food
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and service at your
restaurant
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, which I have visited quite recently, on the 15th March, to be precise. For your information, I was referred by one of my relatives to choose your
restaurant
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to celebrate a special birthday
party
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for my husband. Without
hesitation
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I booked several tables that night and invited some of my family members and close friends to attend
this
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special
event
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. To be honest, I have planned
this
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party
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from
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a few months back to surprise my husband, which has been working out-stationed for the past months.
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, it was very important that
this
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event
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to
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run smoothly. Having to celebrate the special birthday
party
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at your
restaurant
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was a great decision that I have made. Not only the
food
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was scrumptious but the service was
also
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exceptional. Your team really did a great job in arranging the tables, decorations, and music to accompanied the
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.
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, the
food
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which was served really has exceeded my expectation as well as all the attendees who came that night. I,
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, would like to thank you as well as your team for making the birthday
party
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event
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successful and everyone was
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attended
the
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and service at your
restaurant
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. I would definitely recommend
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restaurant
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to others. Yours faithfully, Cassandra Lee

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • outstanding
  • exquisite
  • impeccable
  • flawless
  • attentive
  • accommodating
  • courteous
  • prompt
  • delicious
  • mouthwatering
  • satisfying
  • memorable
  • thank
  • impressed
  • appreciate
  • grateful
  • recommend
  • celebration
  • occasional
  • special
  • occasion
  • stellar
  • exceptional
  • commend
  • commendable
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