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Establishing good relationships in the workplace is not important, as the primary goal of every person is to focus on work. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

#relationships #workplace #person #focus #work
It is correct to say that focus on
work
 should be of foremost importance rather than maintaining
relationship
Suggestion
relationships
a relationship
the relationship
. As the
word
equipped with wire or wires especially for electric or telephone service
wired
 workplace
suggest
Suggestion
suggests
 it is the place for
work
 only. Most of the young generation, after completion of their studies wish to find
job
Suggestion
a job
jobs
 of their choice where they can display their capabilities. Every person does
hard
Suggestion
the hard work
work
 at workplace for promotion, better job opportunities. If people concentrate on
work
 only
then
 they can
contibute
bestow a quality on
contribute
 positively for their
organistaion
the persons (or committees or departments etc.) who make up a body for the purpose of administering something
organisation
 contrary to negative contribution by maintaining
relationship
Suggestion
a relationship
relationships
the relationship
.
Now a days
Suggestion
Nowadays
 thinking of working generation has changed drastically as they believe in doing only limited
work
 and crave for
attention
Suggestion
the attention
 of the seniors for promotion
in
Suggestion
at
work
. They feel that the more we butter the seniors the more benefits we will get from them.
Instead
 of sitting for long hours in office they adopt the shortcut to
sucess
an event that accomplishes its intended purpose
success
. As luminary says there is no shortcut to
sucess
an event that accomplishes its intended purpose
success
success'
, we should concentrate more on
work
. By doing
so we
Accept comma addition
so, we
 will come with flying colours in life.
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