Research has shown that spending less time in the office can reduce the use of energy (for example, electricity, gas). Thus some companies close for some days a week. Do this advantage of this development outhweight the disadvantage.

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It is argued that the natural resources of consumption could be reduced to a large extent if companies shut down their doors for
few days
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a few days
in a week.
However
, I believe, I would have a negative aspect of development. There are some merits of
this
policy.
Firstly
, natural resources
such
as coal and oil, which are primary sources of energy, could be saved.
In other words
, as we know these resources are being used at an alarming rate in order to generate energy and
this
over consumption will lead to extinction.
Therefore
, if industries adopt
this
(shutdown) policy, perhaps,
this
resources
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resource
might be prevented from extinction.
However
, in my views, there are so many demerits of having
this
retardation and restrictions. It will become a tremendous hindrance in country's progression rate, and Holistic growth. It cannot be denied that in
this
era, people have become addicted to technology and we need more and more work and progress in order to achieve an appropriate development rate. Since, when companies and industries would close the door for saving energy,
although
it would be beneficial for our environment, it brings terrible consequences by reducing work speed.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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