Some people get into debt by buying things they don't need and can't afford. What are the reasons for this behaviour? What action can be taken to prevent people from having this problem?
It is now a known fact that buying things is the new addiction of our century. Some people, in fact, take tons of credits from the bank to buy anything they want, whether it's a need or not, until they find themselves in debt. I will be explaining why
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Nowadays, social media is used by almost everyone, especially teenagers. Due to the recklessness of their age, they tend to be influenced by bloggers who share every detail of their lives with lots of exaggerations and, unfortunately, lies. Suggestion
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, there might be an option for these addicts of spending money. In my point of view, banks should control the accounts in which there are more than usual outgoings. The owners of the accounts ought to be responsible for these expenses and report to the bank to verify that the spendings are due to their need. The ones who are detected as shopping addicts should have a limited account to buy specific things Linking Words
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