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First impressions or important. Some people think that doing well in interviews is the key to securing the position

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Indeed, these days it is difficult to get a good
job
. A
person
's
first
 impression leaves effect on others, due to
this
 reason
large number
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a large number
 of individuals believe that doing well in interviews is the key to
securingng
get by special effort
securing
 a good
job
.
according
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According
 to my point of
view there
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view, there
 are other things which are
also
 involved to get a
job
 so
that is
 why, I do not totally agree with
this
 statement.
this
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This
 will discuss the factors that affect to get a good
job
. To
comments
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comment
 with there is no doubt that
first
 impressions are important and it
also
 helps to get a
job
 because these days almost all companies take interviews to select a new employee.
However there
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However, there
are other factors are
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are other factors
also
 involved part from the
first
 impression, get a good
job
. Fast the multinational companies take written as well as
practical test
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a practical test
the practical test
practical tests
 from the candidate before taking
an
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a
job
 interview. Due to
this
,
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,
a
person
 should have proper knowledge about the particular field of
job
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the job
.
Furthermore
, the
intervieweeselect
 a
person
 on the basis of confidence, arguments and education. Apart from
this
 a
person
 has to work hard to cure a good
job
 all the time, because companies do not tolerate lazy worker for
long time
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a long time
. To conclude,
although
first
 impression should be better to enroll in a
job
 but from my point of view hard work is the key to make a dobbs cure

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