People living in large cities have to face many problems in everyday life. What are those problems? Should the government encourage the people to move to regional towns?

In
this
era of modernization and industrialization,
people
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person's
peoples'
peoples
preferences have changed significantly in terms of living space, livelihood and
lifestyle
. The
number
of people migrating from rural to urban areas
are increasing
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is increasing
with each passing day
.
Accept space
.
But nothing comes free, as people living in urban areas suffer with
alot
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a lot
of issues, namely
traffic
, accommodation and
pollution
.
This
raises the
question
that whether the
government
should play its
part
, and encourage people to relocate to small towns rather than overcrowding the
city
. In
this
essay I'll address
this
question
and explain my own opinion supporting it with examples.
First
and foremost, I believe that the
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relating to or concerned with a city or densely populated area
urban
Arabian
population
does enjoy a
number
of facilities
but, it comes
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, but it comes
with a price, since you can't set foot outside of your house, without getting stuck in
traffic
. Expensive residence, alarming
pollution
and deteriorating mental health due to
stressful
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a stressful lifestyle
lifestyle
, everything seems to be a
part
of a vicious cycle. The only figure of authority, in a
country
, who can play a positive
role
in
this
whole scenario, is the
government
.
Moreover
,
crime
rates are almost always high in the
city
, imparting a venality to the
everydaylife
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everyday life
.
Everytime
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Every time
you flick through the pages of the newspaper or turn on a
television there
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television, there
a news on
crime
and accidents. Urban
population
is mostly busy
in
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with
its daily hectic routine and
thus
, has less time to spare and socialize.
This
in turn imparts a sense of materialism to the
cuty
a large and densely populated urban area; may include several independent administrative districts
city
life.
Furthermore
, most of the issues mentioned above are not the concern of the people living in
suburbs
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the suburbs
, serene environment,
lack
of
traffic
and eco-friendly atmosphere make up the best residential area.
Thus
, the
government
should introduce
such
reforms as those that are available in cultural hubs of the
country
, and
this
would eventually motivate the individuals to
move
away from the cities. All things considered, it can be concluded that the
role
of the
government
is undeniable, since, the primary reason of relocation is the
lack
of reforms in small regional towns and
abundance
Suggestion
an abundance
of amenities in metropolitan cities. In order to galvanize people to
move
back,
this
problem has to be addressed and in a more appropriate way possible. In
this
era of modernization and industrialization,
people
Suggestion
person's
peoples'
peoples
preferences have changed significantly in terms of living space, livelihood and
lifestyle
. The
number
of people migrating from rural to urban areas is increasing with each passing day. But nothing comes free, as people living in urban areas suffer from a lot of issues, namely
traffic
, accommodation and
pollution
.
This
raises the
question
that whether the
government
should play its
part
, and encourage people to relocate to small towns rather than overcrowding the
city
. In
this
essay, I'll address
this
question
and explain my own opinion supporting it with examples.
First
and foremost, I believe that the urban
population
does enjoy a
number
of
facilities but
Accept comma addition
facilities, but
, it comes with a price since you can't set foot outside of your house, without getting stuck in
traffic
. Expensive residence, alarming
pollution
and deteriorating mental health due to
stressful
Suggestion
a stressful lifestyle
lifestyle
, everything seems to be a
part
of a vicious cycle. The only figure of authority, in a
country
, who can play a positive
role
in
this
whole scenario, is the
government
.
Moreover
,
crime
rates are almost always high in the
city
, imparting venality to everyday life. Every time you flick through the pages of the newspaper or turn on the
television there
Accept comma addition
television, there
is news on
crime
and accidents. Urban
population
is mostly busy
in
Suggestion
with
its daily hectic routine and
thus
, has less time to spare and socialize.
This
, in turn, imparts a sense of materialism to
city
life.
Furthermore
, most of the issues mentioned above are not the concern of the people living in the suburbs, serene environment,
lack
of
traffic
and eco-friendly atmosphere make up the best residential area.
Thus
, the
government
should introduce
such
reforms as those that are available in cultural hubs of the
country
, and
this
would eventually motivate the individuals to
move
away from the cities. All things considered, it can be concluded that the
role
of the
government
is undeniable, since, the primary reason of relocation is the
lack
of reforms in small regional towns and
abundance
Suggestion
an abundance
of amenities in metropolitan cities. In order to galvanize people to
move
back,
this
problem has to be addressed and in a more appropriate way possible.
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