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You arranged to visit a friend in Canada but an important event at home now means that you must change the dates of the visit.

#visit #friend #canada #event #home #change #dates
Dear Annie, How are things with you? I know you must be very happy
abut
on the topic of
about
my visit your
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my visit to your
place but
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place, but
 unfortunately
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
 have to postpone my plan because of some other important things to do. I received a result letter that my piano exam failed. How
upset you
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upset, you
 know.
l
Suggestion
L
 plan to retake
this
 exam at the same time we planned to meet. Because the syllabus will be
change
Suggestion
changed
,
this
 is the
last
 chance for me to retake the same syllabus. I must stay home and practice more. I am so much sorry for that. I am unable to make the visit on the planned date.It Is possible for me to visit you later in the year Let me know if it is fine with you. I will be waiting for your reply. See you! Loves Yvette

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