Nowadays the crime rate among young people is increasing why do you think it is happening what can be done by parents to teacher to reduce this?

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Anti social
activities increasing
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activities, increasing
very fast among minors. There are
number
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a number
of factors behind
this
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problen
a state of difficulty that needs to be resolved
problem
. The society is undergoing a degradation of morals and values
.
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.
Father and father and tutor can do many things to solve
this
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dilemma.
which
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Which
will be
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mentioned
in subsequent paragraphs.
To begin
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with, nowadays acts like murder, robbery and many more activities which is
done
produced by a manufacturing process
made
by
juvenile
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juveniles
a juvenile
the juvenile
.
which
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Which
is
very serious problem
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a very serious problem
.
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,
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,
the adolescents of today very ambitious they want to become
ruch
possessing material wealth
rich
over a night.
which
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Which
is
impossible task
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an impossible task
. The trend of nuclear
family
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family, also
also
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one reason.
parents
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Parents
have not enough time to spend with their child. They
no
in the historical present; at this point in the narration of a series of past events
now
look after their children what they are doing in
absences
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the absences
of their father
,
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,
mother.
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moreover
in addition
Moreover
, a very significant cause of the problem is economic condition.
if
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If
people have not enough money to buy something what they want they starts to do unethical and illegal crimes.
However
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, every problem can be dealt with by taking appropriate steps it is
duty
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the duty
a duty
of parents to spend
their quality of time
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their quality time
with their offspring. Give them knowledge about
moral
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morality
and values.
Further
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, set them for a good
time table
a schedule listing events and the times at which they will take place
timetable
.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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