Men do most of the high-level jobs. Should the government encourage a certain percentage of these jobs to be reserved for women? What is your opinion on that? Use your own knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.

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Nowadays men and

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rival in the

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field which is common around the world in

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modern era.

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kinds

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jobs, whereas

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governments

the government

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. In my opinion, I strongly believe that,

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ought to be some percent of jobs reserved for women because they always

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hard and be honest with the

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as well as their responsibility is always essential for the

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she can

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honestly and hard to be successful in the

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always responsible and pleasant

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, women always put the hundred percent effort for doing well in the

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which is mentally

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hardworking not only bring

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success.

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by their responsibility and pressure taking ability. In conclusion, men get the high percent of opportunities

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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310 words

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Gender disparity
Affirmative action
High-level jobs
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Meritocracy
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