We live in a world of technology these days while the internet brings with it clear advantages, the problems in terms of control and security of information outweigh the advantages
Genarally
, everything has Suggestion
Generally
bothe
sides two things or people together
both
pors
and in favor of (an action or proposal etc.)
pros
corns
, an argument opposed to a proposal
cons
internet
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the internet
also
has these sides
In this
technology
world, everyone fully adopted by Suggestion
technological
internet
and it brings us more and more Suggestion
the internet
benifits
. Anyhow, it has some control and financial assistance in time of need
benefits
secutity
the state of being free from danger or injury
security
issues but
nowadays its easily recover by security providers.
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issues, but
Firstly
, in this
fashonated
world, technology makes us to modernlization
and making modern in appearance or behavior
modernization
socializaion
. the act of meeting for social purposes
socializing
socialization
socialising
most
of people still contact with each others Suggestion
Most
throug
the social from beginning to end
through
medias
, despite they could not a means or instrumentality for storing or communicating information
media
being
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be
with
direct touch, at the same time, most of us use it as a platform to improve their Suggestion
in
knowldge
and being as a popular or the psychological result of perception and learning and reasoning
knowledge
celebraty
person. a widely known person
celebrity
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, Alexander babu
, who is the very talented standup comedian, now he is being popular amongst Suggestion
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whole world
by Suggestion
the whole world
youtube
before that never know about him or his talent.
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YouTube
However
,
many people Accept space
,
continiously
suffer at every point
continuously
with
using the Suggestion
by
socialmedias
or webpages
due to some security problems. Facebook Suggestion
web pages
instagram
and others, which are the massive stage for sharing our personal information
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information, therefore
therefore
, people has insufficent
privacy and security. of a quantity not able to fulfill a need or requirement
insufficient
On
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In
other
word, important details of anyone any of various alternatives; some other
another
such
as, bank datas
, company accounts details and other private a collection of facts from which conclusions may be drawn
data
details
informations
are stolen by hackers and most of a message received and understood
information
time
these Suggestion
the time
valunerable
details has been susceptible to attack
vulnerable
missused
by them. used incorrectly or carelessly or for an improper purpose
misused
missed
For instance
, last
year a man had hacked the one hundred fifty peoples
ATM details and Suggestion
people
widrawed
the highes
amount of money in India but he is caught by greater than normal in degree or intensity or amount
highest
indian
police within 24 hours.
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Indian
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21st era we can not dwelling
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eventhough
, it has lots of Suggestion
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disadvantages but
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countries
has special branches for secure the people from cyber crimes. Suggestion
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and we need to extact
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extract
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