In some countries, most people prefer to rent a house rather than buying one. Describe the advantage and disadvantage of renting.

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majority

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the majority

of people prefer renting a

home

rather than buying.

This

essay will discuss both the advantages and disadvantages of renting.

To begin

with, there are various disadvantages from which it is

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analysed

that buying own

home

is not fruitful.

First

and

foremosf

ranking above all others

foremost

, buying a

home

is not an easy

task especially

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task, especially

for the middle class people. Because the price of a particular

house

is very much high.

Moreover

, in the case of renting tenants do not have to pay taxes. Not only

this

, they

also

can change the places by their own wish. On the other side, there are multifarious advantages of

this

development. Owning a

house

gives a sense of personal achievement that tenants cannot enjoy. Being the owner of the

house

, there should be no burden of paying the rent after a month.

This

is the only freedom which

house

owner

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has

. At the end,

house

owner can construct and renovate

house

by his own choice. All the aforementioned standpoints

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take

me to concrete interference that renting a

house

is very much beneficial that buying own

home

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In some countries, most people prefer to rent a house rather than buying one. Describe the advantage and disadvantage of renting.

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