The chart below shows the number of men and women in further education in Britain in three periods and whether they were studying full-time or part-time. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The bar chart illustrates how many males and females

have

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studied

in

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full-time and part-time

education

in the following years: 1970 to 1971, 1980 to 1981 and 1990 to 1991.

It is clear that

in all three time

periods

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more people of both sexes were involved in part-time

education

thanfull-time

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than full-time

.

Overall

the

number

of men in full-time

education

rose from

approximatly

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approximately

100

thousand

to 200

thousand

,

whereas

the

number

of men in part-time

education

was lower in the early nineties than twenty years earlier. As far as women are concerned, the numbers increased in both sectors of

education

. The

number

of

parttime

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part-time

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female students increased dramatically from 700

thousand

to 1.2 million in the

twenty year

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period. The

amount

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number

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of women in full-time

education

went up more gradually from 100

thousand

in 1971 to just over 200

thousand

in 1991.

This

was similar

the

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increase for full-time male students.

To sum up

, the

number

of women in both sectors increased significantly

while

it seems that the rate of men entering part-time

education

decreased a little and was fluctuating.