The chart below shows the number of men and women in further education in Britain in three periods and whether they were studying full-time or part-time. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The bar chart illustrates how many males and females
have
studied Unnecessary verb
apply
in
full-time and part-time Change preposition
apply
education
in the following years: 1970 to 1971, 1980 to 1981 and 1990 to 1991.
Use synonyms
It is clear that
in all three time Linking Words
periods
more people of both sexes were involved in part-time Add a comma
,periods
education
Use synonyms
thanfull-time
. Correct your spelling
than full-time
Overall
the Linking Words
number
of men in full-time Use synonyms
education
rose from Use synonyms
approximatly
100 Correct your spelling
approximately
thousand
to 200 Use synonyms
thousand
, Use synonyms
whereas
the Linking Words
number
of men in part-time Use synonyms
education
was lower in the early nineties than twenty years earlier.
As far as women are concerned, the numbers increased in both sectors of Use synonyms
education
. The Use synonyms
number
of Use synonyms
parttime
female students increased dramatically from 700 Correct your spelling
part-time
thousand
to 1.2 million in the Use synonyms
twenty year
period. The Add a hyphen
twenty-year
amount
of women in full-time Change the quantifier
number
education
went up more gradually from 100 Use synonyms
thousand
in 1971 to just over 200 Use synonyms
thousand
in 1991. Use synonyms
This
was similar Linking Words
the
increase for full-time male students.
Change preposition
to the
To sum up
, the Linking Words
number
of women in both sectors increased significantly Use synonyms
while
it seems that the rate of men entering part-time Linking Words
education
decreased a little and was fluctuating.Use synonyms
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 4 times.
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