Should education and healthcare be free of charge and funded by the government, or should it be the responsibility of the people to pay for these services?

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People are
varing
declaiming wildly
raving
caring
about the
resposable
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responsibility
responsible
for public services
such
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as
education
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and
heathcare
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heath care
. While some of them think these are
rights
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right
for people so it should be free for everyone.
others
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Others
think it is not
soly
ludicrous, foolish
silly
solid
on
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for
the
government
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, it should be paid services.
This
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essay will discuss why
health
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and
education
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must be
free accessable for
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accessible for free
free accessible for
freely accessable for
people, but why
sometime
on certain occasions or in certain cases but not always
sometimes
they have to contribute
for
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to
its
cost
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. There are some rights that the
government
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have
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has
to provide it to their citizen, which include
education
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and
health
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. To illustrate, the annual budget of the
government
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should allocate a part of its budget for these two fields.
In addition
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, healthy and literacy society means wealthy nation.
For example
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, Canada had expend half of their money to improve the
health
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system
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in 1970, which in turn now it has become one of
the healthier
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the healthiest
countries in the world, and spending only 10%
on
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of
healthcare
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health care
system
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.
Thus
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, individuals
has
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have
the right to be educated and treated free in their country.
On the other hand
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, some people think that it is difficult
to
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for
the
government
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to withstand the public
servies
work done by one person or group that benefits another
service
services
serves
soly
without speed ('slow' is sometimes used informally for 'slowly')
slowly
.
Unhealth
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Unhealthy
lifestyle is gaining immense popularity, whereby those who
choiced
stopped up; clogged up
choked
chose
bad
health
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habit should
paid
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pay
the bill not the
government
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.
For instance
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, the governing people in the UK
have passing
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have been passing
are passing
were passing
have passed
have been passed
a new taxation law for fast food restaurants, in order to decrease their costumers.
Furthermore
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, it is difficult to provide high quality
education
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system
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without having tuition fee budget.
For example
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, in Greece, an Euorpian developing country, developed a new
system
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called 50-50
cost
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, which a student paid only half the
education
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cost
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.
Therefore
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, the incredible
cost
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of some public services should be shared with people in order to achieve
excellant
very good;of the highest quality
excellent
services. In conclusion,
wheather
introduces two alternatives
whether
government
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or citizen who paid the bill public services has become a debated topic.
This
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essay discussed why these services should be charged, but why in some case should be paid. In my opinion, those who do not choice sedentary lifestyle and those who live in
unrich
make better or improve in quality
enriched
country should
paid
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pay
for
heath
a healthy state of wellbeing free from disease
health
and
education
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services.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • equity
  • social justice
  • economic benefits
  • productive workforce
  • quality of life
  • social mobility
  • personal responsibility
  • overuse
  • inefficiencies
  • feasibility
  • implementation challenges
  • sustainable funding
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