A person’s worth nowadays seems to be judged according to social status and material possessions. Old-fashioned values, such as honour, kindness and trust, no longer seem important

It might seem that kindness and

honor

bestow honor or rewards upon

honour

are

main representatives

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the main representatives

of personal statues these days, but I completely disagree with

this

thought. Nowadays, people

do not form

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are not forming

their

life

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lives

or make their friendships according to the old-fashioned values

such

as

honor

bestow honor or rewards upon

honour

, kindness, and trust.

For example

, most of the people think that celebrities

are respected

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respect

for their talents or personality. In fact,

majority

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the majority

of these celebrities are admired for their wealth and position. There are plenty of concealed secrets that reveal the real personality and background of famous people. Nowadays, so many young and famous rappers suffer from drug addiction and

overdrinking

alcohol. Things like owning

huge mansion

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a huge mansion

, expensive cars, and yacht have a great impact on adolescents. Teenagers begin to create their future plans by admiring what celebrities have.

However

, it is apparent that expensive cars or huge mansions are the things that not everyone can acquire. But there are a few celebrities that should be presented as

great example

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a great example

.

For instance

, Eminem has been through tough times when he was

child

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a child

. When he was a

kid his,

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kid, his

mother abandoned him,

then

he could not manage to graduate from the high school. Despite these problems, he struggled to be someone successful. In my opinion

everyone especially

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everyone, especially

teenagers admire him for his self-confidence, trust, and courageousness.

However

, I still believe from the bottom of my heart that there are a few people who still respect others for their personality or trust. Most of us try to form great families, make friendships over old-fashioned values, and raise our children to be beneficial citizens

to

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of

in

our community, and when we are treated the way we do not appreciate, we see that as a violation of our relationship. It is apparent that most ordinary people have still old-fashioned faith.

Majority

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The majority

of people follow

life style

a manner of living that reflects the person's values and attitudes

lifestyle

based on these old-fashioned values.