The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The first Map describes the present status of the
center
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centre
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of a small
Town
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town
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called
Isllip
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Islip
,
while
the
second
shows the design for its planned development.
Overall
, it depicts that
at the end
of the
town
's reconstruction, buildings for various functions will be established. Currently, Islip
town
centre
has only one main road with shops located beside it. At the north of the
town
is the countryside,
while
the south shows various forms of housing. Towards the south East , is the presence of a car park and the
the
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south west
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, a school is sited. Several new facilities are
out
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put
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into consideration when creating its developmental plan. First, is the siting of a bus station, shopping
centre
, car park and new houses at the northern side of the main road(which is now made only for
paediastrian
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pedestrian
use).
At the
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southern part o the main road
are
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show
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which location remained unchanged. Towards the southern region of the
town
centre
are new houses now in existence with the previous ones. Structures sited at both
south east
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and north east
remaine
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remained
remain
remains
unchanged,
although
there was a reduction in the size of the car park. It is
also
important to note the presence of a dual
carriage way
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carriageway
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that permits entrance into the
town
centre
through the area surrounding new houses
at
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in
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the northern regions.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words town, centre with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "unchanged" was used 2 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • pedestrian-only zone
  • dual carriageway
  • current
  • surrounded by
  • propose
  • infrastructure
  • bus station
  • car park
  • residential housing
  • traffic flow
  • connectivity
  • green spaces
  • recreational areas
  • development plans
  • main features
  • town center
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