The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

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The first Map describes the present status of the

center

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centre

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of a small

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Town

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town

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called

Isllip

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Islip

while

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the

second

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shows the design for its planned development.

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, it depicts that

at the end

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of the

town

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's reconstruction, buildings for various functions will be established. Currently, Islip

town

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centre

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has only one main road with shops located beside it. At the north of the

town

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is the countryside,

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the south shows various forms of housing. Towards the south East , is the presence of a car park and the

the

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south west

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southwest

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, a school is sited. Several new facilities are

out

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put

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into consideration when creating its developmental plan. First, is the siting of a bus station, shopping

centre

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, car park and new houses at the northern side of the main road(which is now made only for

paediastrian

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pedestrian

use).

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southern part o the main road

are

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show

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which location remained unchanged. Towards the southern region of the

town

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centre

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are new houses now in existence with the previous ones. Structures sited at both

south east

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and north east

remaine

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remained

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remains

unchanged,

although

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there was a reduction in the size of the car park. It is

also

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important to note the presence of a dual

carriage way

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carriageway

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that permits entrance into the

town

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centre

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through the area surrounding new houses

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the northern regions.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".

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Vocabulary: Replace the words town, centre with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 3 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "unchanged" was used 2 times.

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6
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meeting the goal of 7 or more
2
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

223 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

pedestrian-only zone
dual carriageway
current
surrounded by
propose
infrastructure
bus station
car park
residential housing
traffic flow
connectivity
green spaces
recreational areas
development plans
main features
town center

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