Do the dangers derived from the use of chemicals in food production and preservation outweigh the advantages?
Most foods that are purchased these days in small stores and supermarkets have
chemicals
in them as these are used to improve production and ensure the Use synonyms
food
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chemicals
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, it is to improve the product to the eye, and Linking Words
this
is achieved via the use of colourings which encourage people to purchase Linking Words
food
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otherwise
not look tempting to eat. Another reason is to preserve the Linking Words
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the
chemicals
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this
is an advantage to the Linking Words
companies
that sell Use synonyms
food
as their products have a longer shelf life. From Use synonyms
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evidence, it is clear to me that the main benefits are, Linking Words
therefore
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companies
and not to the customer. Use synonyms
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companies
claim these Use synonyms
food
additives are safe and they have research to support Use synonyms
this
, the research is quite possibly biased as it comes from their own Linking Words
companies
or people with connections to these Use synonyms
companies
. It is common to read reports these days in the press about possible links to various health issues Use synonyms
such
as cancer. Linking Words
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also
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such
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To conclude
, despite the fact that there are benefits to placing Linking Words
chemicals
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food
, I believe that these principally help the Use synonyms
companies
but could be a danger to the public. It is unlikely that Use synonyms
this
practice can be stopped, so Linking Words
food
must be clearly labeled and it is my hope that organic products will become more readily available at reasonable prices to all.Use synonyms
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Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
The easiest way to score well on the IELTS Task 2 writing portion is to structure your writing in a solid essay format.
A strong argument essay structure can be split up into 4 paragraphs, each containing 4 sentences (except the conclusion paragraph, which only contains 3 sentences).
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