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Some people think that the best way to reduce time spent in traveling to work is to replace parks and gardens close to the city center with apartment buildings for commuters, but others disagree.Discuss both views and give your own opinion .

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As a result
 of the fast pace of life and the need to be at one's workplace on-
time
 is a chief concern, over some decades, living spaces, namely apartments blocks have been built far from offices and shops and
this
 has added to the stress of commuting, but others feel differently. In the following essay I will discuss both angles and offer my view. Constructing and designing apartment buildings near the city centre is surely convenient for commuters They do not need to take subways or
drive
Suggestion
a drive
 and they could save a lot of
time
 for work or study
However
, if there are too many apartments near the main hub,
this
 could cause traffic delays.
On the other hand
,
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,
 if people replace parks and gardens with apartment buildings
,
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,
 workers will have no places to relax and the environment of the city centre will become worse
.
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.
 It is upset that some people who work for a whole day want to have a walk and enjoy their leisure
time
, but they cannot find any places to exercise or relax
.
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.
Besides
,
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,
 compare with apartments
,
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,
 parks and gardens have a more positive effect on the city’s environment
.
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.
 In summary
,
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,
 replacing gardens and parks with apartments is not the best method to save people’s
time
 in
traveling
the act of going from one place to another
travelling
 to work.And
this
 idea may have a negative effect on harm the city’s environment and causes traffic jam which may waste people more
time
.
Accept space
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
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  • urban areas
  • housing availability
  • alleviating housing crises
  • public transport
  • traffic congestion
  • environmental health
  • biodiversity
  • recreational
  • mental health benefits
  • urban heat islands
  • green lungs
  • community interaction
  • cohesion
  • innovative urban planning
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