At present, science is developing quickly, but some people still have a high opinion of artists. What can the arts tell us of life that science cannot?

With the development of the society,
science
has developed significantly and brought many beneficial achievements in all fields but people are not fascinated
in
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with
science
.
There
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They're
those who argue that
science
does not create
entertainment environment
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an entertainment environment
. To my mind, some following concrete arguments will be given to explain more clearly for
this
issue.
First
of all,
arts
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the arts
have been considered as a kind of
entertainment
. Films, paintings and sitcoms bring a great deal of amusement to people and
this
is a crucial relaxation to help them to reduce stress as well as have more energy to meet demands for their job.
For example
, watching sitcoms on
televesion
broadcasting visual images of stationary or moving objects
television
, people enjoy the same characters in different amusing situations or people experience in varieties of emotional ladders relating different topics in
life
Accept comma addition
life, such
such
as love, career or effort in
life
and
this
makes a great contribution to making well-balanced
life
of the collar workers as well as manual workers. Another reason is that people could enrich their knowledge thanks to
arts
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the arts
. If
some one
a human being
someone
who usually goes to the cinemas or museums, he or she opens his/her mind about historical events, cultures and lifestyles via pictures or films. What is more, watching foreign films with subtitles,
this
is regarded as one of the best
way
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ways
to improve better foreign languages and make sense different customs in many countries in the world. As for
science
, people are not satisfied with these valuable things. It
sems
give a certain impression or have a certain outward aspect
seems
seams
to me that
although
science
brings many crucial achievements for
life
, it does not add
entertainment
for people. People are being suffered from severe pressure
for
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from
in
life
, they come to arts as a form of relaxation to release stress and improving the knowledge.
Arts
Suggestion
The arts
are the most excited
entertainment
in modern society.
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