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some people think that the public health is a responsibility of the government while others think that people should be responsible for their own health. discuss both sides and give your opinion

#people #health #responsibility #government
Group
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A group
 of people
believe
Suggestion
believes
 that
citizens
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citizens'
health
 is a duty of the government while, rest of individuals think that
health
 is a personal liability.
everyone
Suggestion
Everyone
 should take care of himself or herself at personal level
.
Accept space
.
however government
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However, government
However government
also
 plays a pivotal role. I will discuss both the view points mentioned above and later in
conclusion
Suggestion
the conclusion
 would accord on one and
hence
 justify it.
to
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To
 embark with authority should be responsible for
Nation's
Suggestion
the Nation's health
health
.
they
Suggestion
They
 should be provided basic facilities to every
person
. According to the world
health
 organisation (who) good physical, mental and social environment is necessary for the development of any
person
. Government should be responsible to control the pollution and unhealthy environment.
pollution
Suggestion
Pollution
 is the main cause which
effect
Suggestion
affects
affect
 the physical condition of
people
Suggestion
the people
. Society should be organised seminar on
this
 topic and encourage the marathons, community run. By
this
 we create a fit young
person
.
For instance
, fit India movement initiated by our prime
Minister is
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Minister, is
 a good thought.
Secondly
, I believe that physical wellness
is
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are
 personal aspect.
everybody
Suggestion
Everybody
 should be more aware about their fitness. People should take good diet to increase their stamina. They should do exercise on
regular basis
Suggestion
a regular basis
 and tone their
body
Suggestion
bodies
. An aware
person
 should go for regular
health
 check up.
gymnastic
Suggestion
Gymnastic
 apparatus and long walk should make an individual fit good social and mental phase
also
 include in
health
.
so
to a very great extent or degree
So
, calm mind and helpful behaviour should be responsible for good physical condition. Drugs are the enemy of fitness. So
,
Accept space
,
 one should avoid drugs for bright future and good state of physical body.
in
Suggestion
In
 conclusion, I think that both the aspects
are equal but ,
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are equal, but
 I give force on personal responsibilities because
health
 is wealth. A
person
know
Suggestion
knows
 its own physical and personal needs.
so
to a very great extent or degree
So
 every
person
 should take care of
health
 at
priority level
Suggestion
a priority level
. staying in good shape and phase is very essential for an individual

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