some people say that parents should encourage their children to take part in organised group activities in their free time. Others say that it is important for children to learn how to occupy themselves on their own. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Parents try to help their children in all possible

ways but

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ways, but

it doesn't mean that children should not learn

something

an indefinite thing

anything

on their own. It creates a dependency if parents always give solutions to their child's problems. But there are some youngsters who

are introvert

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are introverted

by nature and doesn't open up so easily. These

childrens

a young person of either sex

children

require

external push

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an external push

to get through some situations. Some

childrens

a young person of either sex

children

are very enthusiastic and full of energy. They interact with others try to learn new things.

First let's

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First, let's

talk about parents helping their children at every step of their life that includes teaching them what they should do when they're free. If

this

process

continue

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continues

then

many youngsters will start relying on their parents and lose the ability to think and make any decisions. I remember my childhood friend Rakesh who is still a good friend of mine, had gone through

this

phase of life. When we were in school, he hardly participated in any school function activities on his own. Every time teacher complained about

this

to his parents and

then

his parents push him to take part in

such

occasions. He had faced

this

issue because he was raised that way and his parents didn't allow him to go out and play with other colony

childrens

a young person of either sex

children

.

Consequently

,

this

has made them less interactive and he lacks the capability to make any decision on his own. Youngsters have

fresh mind

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a fresh mind

, they learn what they see. If we allow them to mix up with different peoples, they learn to engage themselves and do good in their future. On the other side, some

childrens

a young person of either sex

children

have certain health issues where parents should always pitch in and help them. But again, they should always try to help their young ones to do things on their own.

This

will lead to a great society and a good culture.