Some people think it is better for children to grown up in the city, while others think that life in the countryside is more suitable for them. What are the advantages and disadvantages of both places?

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SOME PEOPLE BELIEVE THAT ITS IS GOOD FOR CHILDREN TO GROW IN RURAL AREA ON OTHER SIDE SOME CONSIDER URBAN

LIFE

IS BETTER FOR PROPER DEVELOPMENT OF CHILDRENS

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THERE ARE MORE ADVANTAGES OF RURAL

LIFE

FOR GOOD BROUGHT UP OF CHILDRENS.I WILL EXPLAIN BOTH ASPECTS IN MY ESSAY.

FIRST

I WILL EXPLAIN WHY ADVANTAGES OF CITY

LIFE

ARE MORE. CITIES ARE

GOOD PLACE

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A GOOD PLACE

TO LIVE IN TERMS OF HEALTH

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EDUCATION AND OTHER RECREATIONAL ACTIVITIES.

LIFE

IS VERY

ADVANCE

AND FULL OF OPPORTUNITIES FOR CHILDRENS.EDUCATION SYSTEM IN SCHOOLS IS VERY

ADVANCE

AND BASED ON PRACTICAL APPROACH LIKE WELL EQUIPPED LABS AND LIBRARIES.OTHER THAN STUDIES THEY

ALSO

INVOLVE IN EXTRA CARICULLAR ACTIVITIES LIKE SWIMMING

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BOXING

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PAINTING

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CILDRENS Have MORE CHANCE TO PARTICIPATE IN VARIOUS COMPTETIONS.IN CITIES SCHOOLS HAVE MENTORS TO GUIDE CHILDREN FOR THEIR FUTURE.

HOWEVER

PEOPLE IN CITIES FACE ONE MAJOR PROBLEM AND

THAT IS

POLLUTION.IN

ADVANCE

INDUSTRAIL CHILDREN OFTENLY FACE ISSUES RELATED TO BREATHING AND VARIOUS ALLERGIES.CILDREN ARE MORE ENGAGE ON MOBILES AND SPEND LESS QUALITY TIME WITH FAIMLY. ON OTHER HAND URBAN

LIFE

PEACFUL

Suggestion

A PEACFUL

WITH LESS POLLUTION.CHILDREN BECOME MORE CLOSE TO

NATURE BUT

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NATURE, BUT

STILL THEY FACE PROBLEM OF POOR EDUCATIONAL SYSTEM.EVEN HEALTH FACILITIES ARE NOT AVIABLE

LAST

ONE 3 CHILDREN DIED DUE TO WRONG DOSE OF INJECTION BY UN EXPERIENCED DOCTOR

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OTHER THAN

THIS

URBAN AREAS HAVE LESS OPPORTUNITIES FOR

BETTER FUTURE

Suggestion

A BETTER FUTURE

. IN THE END I CONCLUDE MY ESSAY ON THE POINT CITIES ARE MORE DEVELOPED AND

ADVANCE

AND INSPIRE CHILDRENS IN MANY WAYS.THERE IS MORE COMPTETION IN CITIES FOR SURVIVAL AND EVERYONE GIVE THEIR BEST TO ENTER IN THAT RACE.

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6Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
2Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
10Grammar mistakes
 

4 paragraphs

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

7.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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Some people think it is better for children to grown up in the city, while others think that life in the countryside is more suitable for them. What are the advantages and disadvantages of both places?

Include an introduction and conclusion

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