Some people think that planting trees in open spaces in cities and town is more important than building houses.To what extent do you agree or disagree

Although
many people believe that free areas in urban centers should be
allocat
an area that is approximately central within some larger region
centres
ed to grow more plants, I support
this
to a large extend for some reasons. My position is argued
further
with explanations. There are various reasons to support planting in open areas in streets. Foremost
one, is
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the streets
t
he increasin
Accept comma addition
Foremost, one
g pollution in those areas from the gasolines released
from the
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gasoline
vechicles.
As a re
sult, the
a conveyance that transports people or objects
vehicles
amount of carbondioxide rele
ased to the a
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carbon dioxide
tmosphere will be enormous, which can be absorbed by the surrounding trees if planted near busy roads.
Secondly
, the rise in global warming has enhanced the outdoor temperature tremendously. Owing to
this
, walking through roads in daytime h
as be
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the roads
come
s dange
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the daytime
r
ous due to
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is become
was becoming
becomes
has become
is becoming
became
the release of ultraviolet radiations from the sun. Planting more trees in busy centre
thus
,
will be benefici
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the busy centre, thus
the busy centre thus
al to both humans and nature.
Additionally
, encouraging more trees will benefits other spe
cies too
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benefit
.
This
is because various organisms are at the threat
of extinction due to the lose of habitat due to
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are at the threat of extinction due to the losing
are at the threat of extinction due to the lose
cutting down of trees.
Moreover
, having more flora will create a good ecological balance and helps to preserve biodiversity on earth.
For instance
, in Japan planting more trees and shrubs in roadside had made an immense change in effect of global warming and preserving biodioversity.
the diversity of plant and animal life in a particular habitat (or in the world as a whole)
biodiversity
However
, I wouldnot overlook
the othe
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would not
rside too.
To
begin wit
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other side
h, as cities offer a quality life and jobs to various commuters they will have a tendency to own there own building
in u
of them or themselves
their
rban centres.
Also
, the space limitations in those areas should
also
be taken into account. So obviously they could have the tendency to occupy the unused spaces in urban areas to build there livings.
of them or themselves
their
Thus
, to conclude the discussion, it can be
finally
said th
at despite the
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finally be said
issue of space limitation for buildings, I believe protecting environment is rational.

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